She Is My Sun

SHE   IS   MY   SUN

A rush of sun fills this still dim room
As spring comes to the pallid wintry land,                 
Waking  seed in its cool green  womb.
She   gives me her light hand:
Makes me want to be a better man.

She is all my world.  Her laughing honest  eyes
Her soft voice, her hand which holds mine thrills.
She is my birdsong at sunrise,
The  curved rainbow after a storm stills,
My golden orb of sun rising bright over distant hills.  
          
And the red fire that flares within her  vivid
With a hundred  times the heat of the sun
Grips my heart with the fever of  florid  
And countless purple nights of torrid tropical motion
And embrace on the shores of the warm Indian Ocean.              

……………………………………………..

Written for   Francine Roberts’     MAKE   ME   SWOON    contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/28/2011 8:21:00 AM
this is a real winner, syd..need i say more?? CHEERS to last.. ;) huggs!
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Date: 3/25/2011 3:26:00 PM
This is swoonfully good!! So glad I finally got to read it by seeing it on this winners' list. Congratulations, Sydney!
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Date: 3/24/2011 6:31:00 PM
Good to see you in the top six Sydney. Congratulations on your worthy honor in Sixth place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/24/2011 2:32:00 PM
Congrats Syd on your great big win in Francine's contest with these awesome words luv.. enjoy another chart topping win ..
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Date: 3/24/2011 2:23:00 PM
Ahhhh Tanya will be happy! I like this very much and for me it's a number 1 too! I enjoy half rhyme! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 3/24/2011 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 3/24/2011 12:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Make Me Swoon" contest Sydney. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/24/2011 11:08:00 AM
This one goes to my favorite list Sydney. Congrat's on your WIN. Lainie
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Date: 3/24/2011 10:35:00 AM
this was just a joy to read ( and I read it about 12 times) , congrats on your 6th place win in the contest Sydney
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Date: 3/13/2011 6:06:00 PM
what can i say, syd??.. it's a striking tribute to your wife with a delicate, tender work that is lined with a " curved rainbow after a storm still.." magnet!! win , win!! :) huggs SOUP MAIL!
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Date: 3/13/2011 3:47:00 AM
simply beautiful ode to love..best of luck in the contest..Love,Deb
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