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(Inspired By Glenn Hughes' cover of Alice Cooper's "Only Women Bleed") She’d cooked and cleaned and gave her all for him and their three kids. She’d even worked part-time outside their home, but life remained still grim, and never will she live to see her prime. She had escaped his beatings when she’d fled and took her children with her far away because she’d realized she’d end up dead if she had any longer tried to stay, enduring constant yelling and abuse. She’s living with an old friend, trying to keep hidden, yet she’s still had to produce the documents to start her life anew. Her spouse, with gun in hand, appears inside the friend’s house . . . she succumbs to homicide.

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Date: 7/16/2024 9:14:00 PM
your gripping lines reflect the senseless act of abuse and violence...congrats on your high win, andie...superbly done!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/17/2024 1:14:00 PM
thanks so much, Nette.
Date: 7/16/2024 1:20:00 AM
so very sad, 'gave her all for him' says so much too, you have captured much pain and emotions in your lines dear poet. Congratulations.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/17/2024 1:15:00 PM
thanks, Thriveni.
Date: 7/2/2024 9:09:00 AM
I agree with Joe-- it happens way too often. I'm glad there are also survivors, but it saddens me to think about the pain they must endure.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/17/2024 1:16:00 PM
I saw some shows in which women were burned alive. One that survived lived about a month in terrible pain but because she lived, the guy got put away for life. What he deserved was to be burned himself. Maybe he will get that in hell!
Date: 6/29/2024 11:21:00 AM
Ouch! Sad but true -- happens too often. Women use more often poison. When will we learn? Well said.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 6/29/2024 3:44:00 PM
Poison is easier to get away with. Regardless, a tragic, senseless sad affair regardless.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/29/2024 11:53:00 AM
Yes women use poison but the statistics of spouses that murder is much higher among men.
Date: 6/28/2024 5:29:00 PM
what a drama, better sty alone than endure beatings and so on, thanks for the moving poem Andrea, take care
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/29/2024 11:54:00 AM
Thanks, Yann
Date: 6/28/2024 10:32:00 AM
So sad. I wonder why anyone would resort to violence on the same thing they should protect with their lives. It's so unfair. Some men don't want you, can't treat you right and don't even want you to do right by yourself or by anyone. They don't want anyone else to have you, not even happiness or loneliness. Too cruel.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/28/2024 10:57:00 AM
This is something I will never understand about men. I see it In the lives of some of my friends and even in a few of my sisters. Not to this level of brutality but one of my sisters had to divorce an alcoholic pothead when he outright threatened to kill her. I suppose it gets passed on through generations of monkey see, monkey do. A few women are this way too and it's so disgusting to me
Date: 6/28/2024 10:15:00 AM
oh gosh Andrea this is so sad on so many levels and not the romantic type of sonnets I am used to reading! hugs jan xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/28/2024 10:59:00 AM
It happens a lot in the states. Few courts do little to punish these parasites and they right back out of jail to do it all over again
Date: 6/28/2024 6:18:00 AM
Very sad and all too real , Powerful write
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/28/2024 8:30:00 AM
Thanks, Joseph
Date: 6/28/2024 1:00:00 AM
I hate brutal men. This is a sad poem but happens often. He should be starved to death. Best for a win. Thanks for your visit to me last poem. Hugs.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/28/2024 8:31:00 AM
Far too often, Victor. Imagine the stress trying to avoid this monster and the courts just give a slap on the hand
Date: 6/27/2024 11:24:00 PM
A very sad tale. Some are fated to suffer all their life. This can be a story, but such incidents happen around us not rarely.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/28/2024 8:32:00 AM
I know, Valsa. I have seen hundreds maybe thousands of these horrid stories
Date: 6/27/2024 8:29:00 PM
Don't quite know where this one came from, but Annie should have gotten her gun! ~ gw
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/28/2024 8:33:00 AM
The lyrics of Only Women Bleed tell the start of it. Fortunately divorce is the typical answer but not for the obsessive ones.
Date: 6/27/2024 8:20:00 PM
Very sad, but so very true for so many. it also leaves the children shell shock for the rest of their lives. Some change to be not their parents. So, good.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/28/2024 8:34:00 AM
If the boys are beaten too, some of them will sadly become their dad's,
Date: 6/27/2024 5:41:00 PM
Unless this type is kept in jail, he will track her down. I have heard this story many times. He picks vulnerable women. He will never bother me. Thank you for this poem.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/29/2024 1:08:00 PM
Always keep your main guard handy- your cell phone.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/28/2024 8:34:00 AM
Good for you, Hilda
Date: 6/27/2024 3:13:00 PM
Yes, this happens so many times and even more times women suffer at the hands of a male companion or husband. Thanks for going this way with the contest, reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/28/2024 8:35:00 AM
Thanks, Sara
Date: 6/27/2024 2:01:00 PM
Happens too often, I am sure. My Dad always shakes his head, and says what is wrong with these people. Having never had evil in his mind, only the typical thoughts. He was the best love for my Mom! Hugs ~ Kim
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/28/2024 8:36:00 AM
Your mom is lucky . At least one of 5 husbands is abusive, at least emotionally
Date: 6/27/2024 1:49:00 PM
Well good grief I was hoping for a happy ending but none was to be had. Was his name Earl (Dixie Chicks)? Her pals have something for him...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/28/2024 8:38:00 AM
Oh I love that song.

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