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Poem submitted to “X and Y” poetry contest, Seth Pina, sponsor, March 18, 2026

Premiere Contest WinnerSHARPNESS OF COLD, HUNGER OF HEAT

ice shards dangle~ 
each one a stalactite of silence  
waiting to be shattered.  

they don’t melt, just disappear,  
a breath exhaled too soon,  
a word swallowed before speech.  

embers are the orphans of fire,  
still murmuring in yellow tongues,  
still dreaming of ash.  

they remember heat  
but have forgotten how to burn.  

embers remember the weight of flame,  
ice shards dream of drowning in it.  

the world pauses, 
stuck between the sharpness of cold
and heat’s hunger,  
both stubborn, unyielding.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Patterson Avatar
June 15, 2026 at 9:09 PM
Awesome job, Love it executed brilliantly.
Treacher Avatar
April 5, 2026 at 11:25 PM
Great imagery skillfully executed. Can be reread over and over and find new ideas within it each time.
Anaya Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 9:28 AM
Congratulations on your trophy! woohoo~ beautiful ending to a dramatic contrast of thoughts. xXhugs
Dronsfield Avatar
March 30, 2026 at 6:48 PM
Hello Sara, a lovely poem full of imagery and feeling. I loved it. Congratulations!!
Roper Avatar
March 29, 2026 at 7:54 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win. Love the imagery and feel of both cold and fire . Love the lines, “ embers remember the weight of flames. Ice shards dream of drowning in it”
George Avatar
March 29, 2026 at 4:10 AM
Beautiful and profound. Hearty Congratulations on your trophy win dear Sara.
Gauthier Avatar
March 28, 2026 at 7:06 PM
well penned ~
Hind Avatar
March 23, 2026 at 6:19 PM
LOVE this one, how original <3
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