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sharp weapons

As we sailed the fast river of Rhône
the steady sun bleached it a sparkling gold
like the treasures of Caesar’s kingdom

A curtain of fawn-silken tackle, shaded 
back the fervidly garish star scatter,
and cooling flower-scented airs tickled
the senses like touching down-soft silk
 
"zhuang hong zhuang sheng" (Chinese)
“Put on airs’ - Peter and I are Gatsby gilded.
Why not dress - on luminous forenoons?

Pick a heart, any heart and prick it, sharply,
with the sight of a handsome man.
I yet breathless, breathe

What weapon is sharper than libido?

I defend myself, with fashion’s sartorial sparkle.
Frankly, I was hoping for something passively erotic,
you know, foment a false perception - dazzle 
with fancy outwork to tip the cosmic balance

Men will witness what they believe
.
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song for this:
Desperately Trying by Club des Belugas, Anna Luca
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June 15, 2024 at 8:25 PM
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June 16, 2024 at 5:45 AM
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