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Steel Hilted Arced or straight Razor edge with Point ~ Sharp Weapon Of conflict Reflects sunlight Death
Written on 20th March 2019-03-20 For light up the page 3 poetry contest Sponsored by Joseph May.

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Date: 1/10/2022 3:17:00 AM
Tom, I never knew I would live to see the day I would say thank goodness, it is a cold. So much better to be a cold and not COVID. I hope you get well soon. A cold is bad and lays a person low, but COVID is so much worse. Sara..Very creative work you have penned in this one. Way to go.
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Date: 1/10/2022 4:57:00 AM
Thank you very much Sara, glad you enjoyed it, knocking back the lemsips. Tom
Date: 5/16/2019 1:29:00 PM
Bright work, sharp writing ... Salute dear Tom alkas
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Date: 5/16/2019 2:16:00 PM
Thank you Alkas Glad you liked it. Tom
Date: 4/21/2019 5:02:00 PM
Death In the Sunlight Reflects the final journey into the light
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Date: 4/22/2019 3:26:00 AM
Thanks Christopher, I liked your comment. Tom.
Date: 4/18/2019 1:30:00 PM
This is an excellent poem Tom. I like the reference of sunlight then death. Congratulations for your win with this winner! So cool, has to be a fave! Have a story, WWII sword. Can ps mail?
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Date: 4/18/2019 2:08:00 PM
Thank you Sandra, would love to read your story. Tom
Date: 4/1/2019 10:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Tom. Well penned.
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Date: 4/2/2019 2:19:00 AM
Thank you Line. Tom
Date: 3/27/2019 2:01:00 PM
- Congratulations on a great win, Tom :) -
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Date: 3/27/2019 10:36:00 PM
Thank you very much Sunshine. Tom.
Date: 3/26/2019 8:53:00 PM
Tom, great write, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/27/2019 2:10:00 AM
Thank you very much Eve. Tom.
Date: 3/26/2019 7:47:00 PM
Very nicely penned Tom..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 3/27/2019 2:12:00 AM
Thank you Joseph, I'd never heard of a lanterne until you hosted a contest, they are quite challenging. Thanks too for hosting. Tom.
Date: 3/26/2019 5:46:00 PM
Yours is one of the most impressive. A difficult subject done well. Congrats for your win, Tom.
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Date: 3/27/2019 2:10:00 AM
Thank you very much Andrea, glad you liked it. Tom
Date: 3/22/2019 1:41:00 AM
What an outstanding Lanterne poem Tom, I fore see this as a win! Best wishes. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/22/2019 2:46:00 AM
Thanks Jennifer, fingers crossed. Hope you're well. Tom.
Date: 3/21/2019 2:30:00 PM
Sharp Lanterne artfully written dear Tom!! Witty!
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Date: 3/21/2019 4:32:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios. Tom
Date: 3/20/2019 10:35:00 PM
A strong lanterne, Tom, sharp and to the point:)
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Date: 3/21/2019 8:16:00 AM
Thank you very much Jo. Tom
Date: 3/20/2019 5:04:00 PM
Great one Tom! :)
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Date: 3/20/2019 5:08:00 PM
Thank you very much Heidi, not an easy one to do. Tom.
Date: 3/20/2019 3:37:00 PM
A truly brilliant and finely woven creation my friend. A fav, I've always wanted to have a sword collection--instead I collected books.
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Date: 3/20/2019 5:08:00 PM
Thank you very much Robert, interesting objects for sure but you can learn so much from books. Tom.
Date: 3/20/2019 3:14:00 PM
Well penned, Tom.
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Date: 3/20/2019 4:51:00 PM
Thank you very much Line. Tom.
Date: 3/20/2019 2:30:00 PM
fascinating way to convey a sword's power, tom... enjoyed the end lines!...huggs
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Date: 3/20/2019 2:34:00 PM
Thank you nette, happy you liked it. Tom.
Date: 3/20/2019 11:46:00 AM
Well done to have achieved the acrostic according to the prescribed syllabic count and given a great description of your chosen theme, but you've cleverly managed to relate the first and last lines of each to make it a perfect 'lanterne' format. Bravo,Tom!
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Date: 3/20/2019 1:11:00 PM
Thank you very much Wendy, not the easiest form I've attempted. Tom.
Date: 3/20/2019 11:43:00 AM
Well written, Tom. A sharp poem.
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Date: 3/20/2019 1:10:00 PM
Thanks Vijay,haha love your comment Tom.
Date: 3/20/2019 11:29:00 AM
A sword can be used in many ways, lovely write Tom, Witty and brilliant xo
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Date: 3/20/2019 1:09:00 PM
Thanks Pixie, glad you liked it. Tom.
Date: 3/20/2019 11:17:00 AM
WOW what awesome formatting Tom you certainly made your point!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/20/2019 1:09:00 PM
Thank you Jan, started doing one about bread but struggled then started the sword one and managed to find words for it. Tom.
Date: 3/20/2019 11:03:00 AM
Even a symbol of victory...Nice write Tom...
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Date: 3/20/2019 1:07:00 PM
Thank you Arturo Tom.
Date: 3/20/2019 9:58:00 AM
Good luck in the contest Tom. You are such a gifted writer, trying new things. I admire that!
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Date: 3/20/2019 10:11:00 AM
Thanks you Caren, it came out all over the place, tried to centre it and put the first letter in bold , computer nearly went out the window, got there in the end. Tom
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