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Sharp Sword

Steel
Hilted
 Arced or straight
 Razor edge with
Point
~
 Sharp
 Weapon
 Of conflict
Reflects sunlight
 Death



Written on 20th March 2019-03-20

For light up the page 3 poetry contest

Sponsored by Joseph May.

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Sara Kendrick Date: 1/10/2022 3:17:00 AM Tom, I never knew I would live to see the day I would say thank goodness, it is a cold. So much better to be a cold and not COVID. I hope you get well soon. A cold is bad and lays a person low, but COVID is so much worse. Sara..Very creative work you have penned in this one. Way to go. Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 1/10/2022 4:57:00 AM Thank you very much Sara, glad you enjoyed it, knocking back the lemsips. Tom

Alkas Poetry Date: 5/16/2019 1:29:00 PM Bright work, sharp writing ... Salute dear Tom alkas Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 5/16/2019 2:16:00 PM Thank you Alkas Glad you liked it. Tom

Christopher Flaherty Date: 4/21/2019 5:02:00 PM Death In the Sunlight Reflects the final journey into the light Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 4/22/2019 3:26:00 AM Thanks Christopher, I liked your comment. Tom.

Sandra L. Weiss Date: 4/18/2019 1:30:00 PM This is an excellent poem Tom. I like the reference of sunlight then death. Congratulations for your win with this winner! So cool, has to be a fave! Have a story, WWII sword. Can ps mail? Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 4/18/2019 2:08:00 PM Thank you Sandra, would love to read your story. Tom

Line Gauthier Date: 4/1/2019 10:43:00 PM Congrats on your win, Tom. Well penned. Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 4/2/2019 2:19:00 AM Thank you Line. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/27/2019 2:01:00 PM - Congratulations on a great win, Tom :) - Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 3/27/2019 10:36:00 PM Thank you very much Sunshine. Tom.

Eve Roper Date: 3/26/2019 8:53:00 PM Tom, great write, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 3/27/2019 2:10:00 AM Thank you very much Eve. Tom.

Joseph May Date: 3/26/2019 7:47:00 PM Very nicely penned Tom..Congrats on your win.. Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 3/27/2019 2:12:00 AM Thank you Joseph, I'd never heard of a lanterne until you hosted a contest, they are quite challenging. Thanks too for hosting. Tom.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/26/2019 5:46:00 PM Yours is one of the most impressive. A difficult subject done well. Congrats for your win, Tom. Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 3/27/2019 2:10:00 AM Thank you very much Andrea, glad you liked it. Tom

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 3/22/2019 1:41:00 AM What an outstanding Lanterne poem Tom, I fore see this as a win! Best wishes. Poetry hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 3/22/2019 2:46:00 AM Thanks Jennifer, fingers crossed. Hope you're well. Tom.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/21/2019 2:30:00 PM Sharp Lanterne artfully written dear Tom!! Witty! Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 3/21/2019 4:32:00 PM Thank you Demetrios. Tom

Joanna Daniel Date: 3/20/2019 10:35:00 PM A strong lanterne, Tom, sharp and to the point:) Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 3/21/2019 8:16:00 AM Thank you very much Jo. Tom

Heidi Sands Date: 3/20/2019 5:04:00 PM Great one Tom! :) Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 3/20/2019 5:08:00 PM Thank you very much Heidi, not an easy one to do. Tom.

Robert Lindley Date: 3/20/2019 3:37:00 PM A truly brilliant and finely woven creation my friend. A fav, I've always wanted to have a sword collection--instead I collected books. Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 3/20/2019 5:08:00 PM Thank you very much Robert, interesting objects for sure but you can learn so much from books. Tom.

Line Gauthier Date: 3/20/2019 3:14:00 PM Well penned, Tom. Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 3/20/2019 4:51:00 PM Thank you very much Line. Tom.

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/20/2019 2:30:00 PM fascinating way to convey a sword's power, tom... enjoyed the end lines!...huggs Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 3/20/2019 2:34:00 PM Thank you nette, happy you liked it. Tom.

Wendy Watson Date: 3/20/2019 11:46:00 AM Well done to have achieved the acrostic according to the prescribed syllabic count and given a great description of your chosen theme, but you've cleverly managed to relate the first and last lines of each to make it a perfect 'lanterne' format. Bravo,Tom! Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 3/20/2019 1:11:00 PM Thank you very much Wendy, not the easiest form I've attempted. Tom.

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/20/2019 11:43:00 AM Well written, Tom. A sharp poem. Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 3/20/2019 1:10:00 PM Thanks Vijay,haha love your comment Tom.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 3/20/2019 11:29:00 AM A sword can be used in many ways, lovely write Tom, Witty and brilliant xo Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 3/20/2019 1:09:00 PM Thanks Pixie, glad you liked it. Tom.

Jan Allison Date: 3/20/2019 11:17:00 AM WOW what awesome formatting Tom you certainly made your point!:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 3/20/2019 1:09:00 PM Thank you Jan, started doing one about bread but struggled then started the sword one and managed to find words for it. Tom.

Arturo Michael Date: 3/20/2019 11:03:00 AM Even a symbol of victory...Nice write Tom... Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 3/20/2019 1:07:00 PM Thank you Arturo Tom.

Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/20/2019 9:58:00 AM Good luck in the contest Tom. You are such a gifted writer, trying new things. I admire that! Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 3/20/2019 10:11:00 AM Thanks you Caren, it came out all over the place, tried to centre it and put the first letter in bold , computer nearly went out the window, got there in the end. Tom