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Shark In the Soup

In my soup I could have sworn I saw a shark. Swimming in roux that was rather dark. But to my relief, the fin a bay leaf. Now I wear glasses before each meal I start. 12/27/18

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Date: 1/6/2019 5:55:00 PM
(this made me giggle AGAIN)! Back with congratulations!
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Date: 1/6/2019 2:38:00 PM
What a clever limerick, Wren, and a creative approach to the contest. Congratulations on your success in Anthony's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Wren Rushing
Date: 1/6/2019 3:35:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn!
Date: 1/6/2019 6:58:00 AM
Good one, Wren. Congrats.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 1/6/2019 8:31:00 AM
Thank you Line have blessed day my friend!
Date: 1/6/2019 4:16:00 AM
oh so funny Wren the imagery is brilliant you cooked up a brilliant poem:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Wren Rushing
Date: 1/6/2019 8:31:00 AM
Thank you Jan!
Date: 12/27/2018 5:05:00 PM
Wren, your limerick was so much fun to read and a winner in my opinion ~
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Wren Rushing
Date: 12/27/2018 6:42:00 PM
Thank you Dear!
Date: 12/27/2018 3:31:00 PM
i have not seen this take on this contest! if the roux is dark enough there's no telling what's in there!!!
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Wren Rushing
Date: 12/27/2018 6:42:00 PM
Maybe shark gumbo!

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