Sharing Dad

Dad was puttering around today
Playing with me
God we haven’t played in years
	You know, Dad’s eighty now 
	I remember how he looked in photos at twenty
I remember the twinkle in his eyes
at my sons two year old birthday party.	
We played computer, you see Dad it can do this LOOK
LOOK here it does this too!
	I did so like kissing the top of his bald head.
So good to see that old comb-over long gone now
So good to smell the MY Dad smell of clean clothes and soap.
Your files need to be organized Dad.
You have them all glommed up in with the general documents files.
Know wonder you can’t find them, all the love poems to his dear heart Ruth.
	I wonder if he remembers my wedding day.
	He was so handsome in his tux that day.
                I remember his smile then as he watched me 
                walk the white carpet in the garden by the mill pond.
Joy, now is that any name to call a dog [oops SHE doesn’t know she’s a dog!]
The dust mop of a pooch barked indignantly as, I took her Daddies attention from 
her.
              Had a dog once, Babe was her name, she was a huge sheepdog, we lost    
our Babe when I lost my Dad for a long time, BUT he's been back along while too 
now

Dad was sharing with me and I so loved it. Me, of course being his first girl, 
sharing with me, his love and happiness with his last girl OUR Ruth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/29/2011 2:30:00 PM
Lovely, warm write. Thanks for sharing.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/29/2011 2:19:00 PM
Lovely memories of your Dad - as I read it, I remembered how my Gran always smelt of shampoo and soap - thanks for bringing those memories back to me : )
Login to Reply
Date: 4/29/2011 1:36:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Debbie. Wishing you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. I hope the sun shines down upon you and brings joy into your heart. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 4/29/2011 9:58:00 AM
Oh wow, this sure is very touching Debbie-- I can just feel that love and I just live how you brought us along with you-- could picture this so well and you just got me plain 'ol smiling with your last lines-- love it-- and thanks for passing by my poem, aww me thinks that that Alice had a grander time though? Thank you, had loads of fun writing it :D maybe this little monkey will swing to another tree, & also that dream weaver, hmm I think I need to ask him for a photo ;)
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2011 11:42:00 PM
Touching tribute to your aging father, Deb. I didn't know you had a son! Enjoyed learning how you still have fun with your Dad. When we're with our parents, we still feel young. Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2011 11:27:00 PM
Deb, this is so interesting. It makes me curious to understand it more. Like when you said he was lost for a long time. What did you mean by that? Very cool poem.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2011 6:27:00 PM
Well very touching indeed Debbie and my Daddy was ever so special to me for the little time I had him in my life..but Mom always kept him alive in my heart ... wonderful tribute to share with us luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2011 4:10:00 PM
Small moments are the ones that are more memorable......isn't it funny, how the tender little shared snippets of life, can be the gifts unknowingly worth more than gold...if only we knew that while they are happening. So lovely a poem from you today~
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter