Sharing a Rainbow

There once was a total Lunar Eclipse
My friends turned to werewolves eating some chips
Next year I shall see
Who truly will be
Honest in feelings...the rest will grow hips.

There once was a flood in San Diego
I almost drowned but a voice shouted "No!"
I grasped air so deep
I saw next year's tip
Keep those with no fangs - sharing  a rainbow...

for Carolyn Devonshire's Contest; " New Year's Resolutions"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/5/2011 12:41:00 PM
All the best in the contest, even though I do make NY resolutions again, I will resolve to read more of you.
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Date: 1/3/2011 7:01:00 AM
adorable, congrats on your win in the contest Iolanda
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Date: 12/31/2010 7:35:00 PM
Unique expressions in your honorable poem's presentation Iolanda. Congratulations on your poem's place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/31/2010 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win in Carolyn's Contest, Iolanda! Happy NEw Year filled with God's blessings! Love, audrey
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Date: 12/31/2010 9:19:00 AM
Very interesting write, Iolanda. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 12/30/2010 9:59:00 PM
Interesting limericks, Iolanda. A big congratulations on your win. CELEBRATE!!!
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Date: 12/30/2010 5:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/30/2010 11:39:00 AM
Congratulations Iolanda on your well deserved win.
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Date: 12/30/2010 6:20:00 AM
Happy new year and congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of carolyn, Iolanda
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Date: 12/30/2010 5:53:00 AM
Congratulations Iolanda on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's "New Year's Resolutions". contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2010 10:43:00 PM
Stunning write and I absolutely love your approach for the contest.. Enjoyed your wit this morning Iolanda.. Hope 2011 will be a blessed year for you in all areas of your life ;-)
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Date: 12/25/2010 8:38:00 PM
nic poem, merry x- mass
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Date: 12/24/2010 7:21:00 PM
very funny and with innocent humor, Iolanda. Good luck
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Date: 12/24/2010 5:05:00 PM
lighthearted and totally disarming,iolanda.. best of winning wishes in the contest and merry christmas! :) nette
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Date: 12/24/2010 12:09:00 PM
Wonderful! I enjoyed, looking forward to reading more. Have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Years! Take Care. Dana'lynn
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