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Sharing a Rainbow

There once was a total Lunar Eclipse My friends turned to werewolves eating some chips Next year I shall see Who truly will be Honest in feelings...the rest will grow hips. There once was a flood in San Diego I almost drowned but a voice shouted "No!" I grasped air so deep I saw next year's tip Keep those with no fangs - sharing a rainbow... for Carolyn Devonshire's Contest; " New Year's Resolutions"

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David Smalling

Date: 1/5/2011 12:41:00 PM

All the best in the contest, even though I do make NY resolutions again, I will resolve to read more of you.

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/3/2011 7:01:00 AM

adorable, congrats on your win in the contest Iolanda

John Freeman

Date: 12/31/2010 7:35:00 PM

Unique expressions in your honorable poem's presentation Iolanda. Congratulations on your poem's place. Agape, Moses

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/31/2010 11:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your great win in Carolyn's Contest, Iolanda! Happy NEw Year filled with God's blessings! Love, audrey

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 12/31/2010 9:19:00 AM

Very interesting write, Iolanda. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2010 9:59:00 PM

Interesting limericks, Iolanda. A big congratulations on your win. CELEBRATE!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/30/2010 5:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 12/30/2010 11:39:00 AM

Congratulations Iolanda on your well deserved win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/30/2010 6:20:00 AM

Happy new year and congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of carolyn, Iolanda

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/30/2010 5:53:00 AM

Congratulations Iolanda on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's "New Year's Resolutions". contest. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/28/2010 10:43:00 PM

Stunning write and I absolutely love your approach for the contest.. Enjoyed your wit this morning Iolanda.. Hope 2011 will be a blessed year for you in all areas of your life ;-)