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We used to share dreams; thoughts, my sister and me. I occupied the top bunk, she the lower in the cold, dank bedroom we once inhabited from dusk to dawn. Not prophetic dreams, the future; we had no perception, illusions. No exchanging, dissembled violent nightmares, or nightly voyages traveled solitarily. But joint adventures that filled the time between awakening and permission to arise. An alternative to staring quietly at a half a dozen lazy flies performing elaborate cotillion around a solitary bare lightbulb. The game was simple; A subject was agreed, then tiny imaginary books pressed tightly into blinkered eyes would lightly lead us to places, we could simultaneously inhabit. Seamless journeys to picture-postcard lands, often hand in hand with much-loved authors. Young Spanish kings, wise Arab princes, Pink fairy queens and fiery golden dragons. Flying, swimming, never falling, never drowning. No words spoken; vividly shared visions; two young minds together, escaping; to places far less painful than reality. Secret sacred memories; each one I can still recall, relive, enjoy. A Tender Moment From Childhood Poetry Contest: Placed 2nd Sponsored by: Malabika Ray Choudhury Date wrote: 05-June-2021

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Date: 7/2/2021 1:45:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... yes, evoking "sacred memories" we are thankful to delight in. God bless you.
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/2/2021 4:20:00 AM
Thank you Beata for visiting and your too kind words.
Date: 7/1/2021 7:53:00 PM
two young minds together, escaping; to places far less painful than reality. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/2/2021 12:47:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 7/1/2021 2:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your fabulous win, Terry. BW ~ Mala
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/2/2021 12:47:00 AM
Thank you so much for the placement and kind comments. Also thank you for sponsoring this contest entering them always inspires me.
Date: 7/1/2021 2:38:00 PM
The imagination of children is endlessly magical. Such a nostalgic write as you share the special bond between you and your sister. Congratulations on your win, Terry! :)
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/2/2021 12:48:00 AM
Thank you for your so kind comments.
Date: 6/6/2021 6:55:00 PM
You have shared some truly special moments, a kind of innocence that seems to be lost on the generations of the devices. Their loss! Great one, Terry. ~ Gershon
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Terry Miller
Date: 6/7/2021 7:11:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by and reading, and for your kind comments.

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