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Seasons passage humming goodbye Still my capricious heart still lie Veiling a life of fulfilment My fervent wavering torment Heart whirr fill of fluttering blue Butterflies weave in escape queue Within infinitude of grief, Death has stolen, there's no relief Share with me your smile in a fluttering leaf 10/22/2020

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Date: 10/24/2020 6:37:00 PM
This is penned so poetically! Beautiful thoughts and images, all with such a soft, yet haunting undertone. Thank you, Eve.
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Date: 10/23/2020 1:26:00 AM
This must be for some contest as I've seen the picture before. Your poetry takes me to vistas far and wide, Love it. ~~
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Date: 10/22/2020 6:17:00 PM
so gorgeous and fits perfectly with that picture. I saw this picture with someone else's poem too. Is it for a contest? Lovely, Eve.
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Date: 10/22/2020 7:00:00 PM
Thank you for the compliment, Andrea, just wrote it because I loved the picture, I kind of borrowed from Sunshine Haiku poem. I did entered it in Brian's contest. Hugs Eve
Date: 10/22/2020 4:18:00 PM
So beautiful and mystical... a touch of inspiration woven into the fabric of this lovely work. God bless you sweet lady
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Date: 10/22/2020 3:55:00 PM
Sad, but so smoothly it's said, Eve. So vivid, and musical, too!!
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Date: 10/22/2020 3:46:00 PM
beautiful in its sadness Eve, love the image too:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/22/2020 2:06:00 PM
This is excellent, Eve, and the ending is truly inspired! Regards & Hugs // paul
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