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Shards of Light

Heavenly splendour- powerful as it shines bright, unstoppable light Fire burns in the sky- Demands instant attention, no shade hides its might. Can you protect me? Power so strong, can not live without this sunshine. Not for contest, just some ideas....still being inspired. Just for enjoyment

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Carrie Richards

Date: 4/10/2010 7:42:00 AM

You are on a roll with this one, Gareth!! Great work, each on it's own merit! Love, Carrie.......ps...many thanks for my placement in your "Best Day" contest!! I was so pleased!!

Constance La France

Date: 4/10/2010 6:30:00 AM

Beautiful words, Gareth, just lovely.. I want to thank you so much, for placing my poem, The Day, I Met Love, in 9th place in your, The Best Day of My Life Contest, I am feeling the glory, thanks for sponsoring an amazing and inspiring contest .... love constance

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/10/2010 5:45:00 AM

Well any verse will do well in your Haiku poem Gareth ...should u enter one in Raul's contest... I like them all... enjoyed reading your creative write ..and thankxxx for choosing "The Award" as your 3rd place winner in your excellent and challenging contest... so appreciate this win as this poem is special to the "Sweetheart's" heart... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/9/2010 10:06:00 PM

I enjoyed the poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2010 9:11:00 PM

Gareth, you are on the same track I was taking with this one. Such heavenly splendor, you don't want to stop it!! Great thoughts. Luv, Andrea

Date: 4/9/2010 4:53:00 PM

Interesting reflection on the picture. You have me smiling with the opening line. Keep that light shining. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comment. Have a good weekend. Karen