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Shapes Square...the boring, the shy type, yet, not at all dumb, Circle...keep 'in' your chum and keep 'out' the ho-hum, Rectangle...just a longer square, scrawny, and skeletal, Oval...flattened circle, straight, or not, sexually pivotal, Triangle...life: eat, sleep and sex, tiresome instrument, Heart...the source that pumps blood, passion stimulant, Octagon...a square want to be well-rounded, stop sign, Crescent...fertility, Osman dreamt the end of Byzantine, Cross...Christian symbol, missed greatness o'er stupidy, Diamond...crystal, brilliant, to keep with much difficulty. 2021 February 21 *2nd Place* List With A Twist ~~charles messina

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Date: 4/18/2021 9:26:00 AM
This is great thought here, William, combining shapes with their significance. Well done, and Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 4/18/2021 10:50:00 AM
Thought it should be cute, Andrea, much appreciated my friend:), Aloha!
Date: 2/23/2021 10:14:00 AM
Nicely done William. Insightful and well-expressed. :) Linda
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Date: 2/23/2021 3:41:00 PM
Thank you, Linda, for your wondrous considerations, Aloha!
Date: 2/21/2021 5:39:00 PM
Not at all dump!enjoyed
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Date: 2/21/2021 7:06:00 PM
Thank you, Muhammad, pleasure is all mine, Aloha!

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