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I am just a girl writing poetry (a woman) poetess like many and it is sad how there are cliques that push their views allmostlike . . . a gang with an influential alpha leader the center of attention in words and words( infinity) abashing the non-believers (those of a different opinion) a narrow-minded few and haven for personswithmeanbraincells I am no stranger to this pain(this childish devastation) they have no respect for right or wrong or hurting will bash anyone who stands alone . . . the followers(like puppydogswaggingtails)follow mindlessly oh gawd I don't like the clickclattercrackleclink of endless words the cliqueycliquishcliquishly the inner circle of bullys held together by a thread of theatrical banterlikebehavior I know this behaviour(Iwas5yearsold) see it is not just adolescents girls who enjoy cliquishness a small group of few can form a crew agangofbashers shameonyou . . . but . . . I am proudstrong I am not in a clique I am independent(yearsofbullying)has been my companion so echoic cliques are useless againstthehighwall I have built to protect my soul my spirit my poetry(yet you can still) breakanalreadybrokenheart . . . shame on you and thissweetkindgirlwoman has had enough _____________________________ May 30, 2015 Poetry/Free Verse/shameonyou Copyright Protected, ID 05-678-445-30 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Women Only #2, sponsor, Kelly Deschler, Judged 2015 Fourth Place Poem of the Day, June 1, 2015

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/15/2015 9:40:00 AM

So glad to see this on back and riding high.

Skat A

Date: 7/14/2015 11:44:00 PM

Broken, congratulations on your win. **SKAT**

Lee Carter

Date: 7/14/2015 11:36:00 PM

Love this broken wing... Congrats !

Kelly Deschler

Date: 7/14/2015 10:49:00 PM

It would be sad if all of us here were divided instead of united in a common passion... I agree with what you've expressed so wisely in this poem. Congrats on the win!

Funom Makama

Date: 6/8/2015 3:23:00 AM

This is adorable and extremely cute. Your soul just diffused into mine to wonderfully correlate with your message. Great work friend and thanks a zillion for visiting my page. I hope to be able to attract more of your attention. Once again this is an awesome piece of creativity. selah!

Jack Horne

Date: 6/3/2015 5:37:00 AM

thought I'd come back to read one more of yours before continueing with the catch up - I've got a LONG way to go yet! Enjoyed this experimental piece, my friend

Paul Callus

Date: 6/2/2015 9:53:00 AM

This is powerful and expressive, Constance!! Shame on those who make people's lives a misery, on those who cause rifts and pain, who break hearts and drive others to the cliff's edge. Congrats for POTD. All the best. // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/2/2015 1:08:00 AM

I'm not here yet Broken, but I will be in a few days. I'm enjoying my last days with my sweetheart Nate. He will be leaving soon:-( :-( :-( I too love the way you struck everyone out. WOW! Love it. Shame on anyone saying we aren't good enough, anyone saying we are doing it wrong. We are all made out of love. I don't Do cliques. I enjoy standing with my family and friends. I don't do hateful commissions, however, I will stand up to those who accumulate too much saliva of bad taste. You are amazing. Congrats with POEM OF THE DAY.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/1/2015 9:20:00 PM

Congratulations on poem of the Day. I just had a niece picked on this week in middle school because her color of skin is white and not brown. They don't realize her skin color might be lighter but she is of the same race. Wonderful write, a fav. and a 7 Hugs eve

Sandra Haight

Date: 6/1/2015 8:44:00 PM

Wow, just saw your poem as POTD, Broken! My heartfelt congratulations to you! Such a fantastic poem offered with honesty and courage! Hugs, Sandra

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/1/2015 3:03:00 PM

Outstanding, Constance...I love the honesty, the clever wordplay and layout!! Congrats on being chosen TPOD! Hugs, Rhonda

Neva Romaine

Date: 6/1/2015 2:37:00 PM

Hey Broken Wings, BIG congratulations on your excellent poem being chosen as POTD! Be Blessed, Neva

Wilfred Aniagyei

Date: 6/1/2015 2:24:00 PM

Great write here, Broken Wings!!! Loved this...so sincere.... Congrats on POTD!!!

Literal Fantasy

Date: 6/1/2015 2:01:00 PM

So good! I've never seen poetry written this way before. Amazing x

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/1/2015 1:23:00 PM

This is a fantastic poem, Constance. Well deserving of POTD. You wrote with class and finesse and told the truth from your heart. Congrats.

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/1/2015 12:39:00 PM

Wow, Congratulations Broken on your POTD! Hmmn...the spirit of Poetry Soup is on your side. I like your write, Broken. HUgs!

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/1/2015 9:40:00 AM

You stood up to the bullies in this one! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/1/2015 9:01:00 AM

I'm lovin this one Constance, I see why you were chose. Enjoy the roses and wear the crown with pride. Hugs Rick

Constance La France

Date: 6/1/2015 8:42:00 AM

oh wow and wow, put me on a pedestal, put a crown on my head, give me a bouquet of red roses, I am so happy that my shameonyou poem has been selected as POEM OF THE DAY

Mark Ackerson

Date: 6/1/2015 8:19:00 AM

One thing I like about you Broke, is your tenacity to tell it like it is and march to your own drummer. I wrote 'City of Gold' and slapped it on soup; one gal asked me where on earth did I expect to get it published at. I followed rhyme and meter scheme of Robert Service's 'Cremation of Sam McGee.' This guy is awesome! Some stuff I'll try to get published, but it ain't why I write. For some people, it is...

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/1/2015 6:21:00 AM

A very well written poem. I was just reading some of E.E. Cummings a few days ago :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/1/2015 5:46:00 AM

- Glad you're strong B.W. ..... but so many who suffer .... both children and adults - a really well written poem - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/1/2015 3:52:00 AM

Am loving your recent powerful pen's Broken Wings - I love the form you have used with this both and Bite me :-) Great to read this again and see it honoured as poem of the day:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 5/31/2015 9:34:00 AM

A friend told me yesterday, he ran with a certain crew. Then noticed how disappointed he was. After he stop pretending to be like them. He became loved, adored. So it's not about being like others. It's about being yourself. it works For Me. I see it works for you. That's why we are loved by Many. Fake are the ones trying so hard.... lolololol

Skat A

Date: 5/31/2015 9:26:00 AM

I love this. Broken, to form hate is to be hate. And boy are they blind and self centered. Some people belong in coffe shops Others Do not. So for this I am saying. They are masters of nothing trying to fit in groups with hypocrisy problems. They like to diagnose others, with the mental disorders they have. I have a welcome mat for all, I'm glad it's bully proof. LoL. These bullies try to use the intelligence of others. So now, you tell me who's the bigger coppy paste lenders. yup, the gossiping crew. Weakness and insecurity happens to be the only thing they have in common. So I am happy they have a clique to join. I'm so glad to be different. I enjoy knowing after all these years I still give them something to talk about. A favorite post