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Composed for the "Ridiculous Comparisons" contest sponsored by Miranda Hawley.

Shall I Compare Thee To an Elephant?

Shall I compare thee to an elephant?
Thou art a thousand times more relevant.
'Tis not from floppy ear doth ardor rise,
Nor yet shall sinuous trunk knot love’s sweet ties;
And if thou can’t stampede across the plains,
Nor deftly roll in mud when monsoon rains,
I find my heart shall hold here little lack,
As pachyderm thou aren’t in love’s soft sack.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 5:41 AM
Too funny, Shakespeare! LOL and congrats!
Prothero Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 10:04 AM
Thank you!
Miller Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 8:04 AM
Brilliant, congratulations
Prothero Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 10:35 AM
Thank you!
Hawley Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 11:27 AM
I am a thousand times more relevant than an elephant! Nice entry for my contest and congrats on your win.
Prothero Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 1:48 PM
Thank you for the kind thought and for sponsoring the contest, which I enjoyed.
Lane Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 12:54 AM
Ode to an elephant would be adored by a thick skinned woman.
Lane Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 2:49 PM
Good edit.
Prothero Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 2:34 PM
Thank you! The details matter, don't they? I think changing "that" to "as" in the last line improved it considerably.
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