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Shall I Compare Her To a Crimson Rose

Shall I compare her to a crimson rose? Her petals glisten in the morning air; on slender stem, her gentle beauty shows as bright sun rays are shining through her hair. Her tender fragrance drifts and fills the room with scented freshness of a summer's morn; a lovely blossom and one would assume that deep within, her beauty would be borne. But as I reach to touch her slender stem and draw her closer to my yearning heart; I feel the trueness of this garden gem, a piercing pain which hidden thorns impart. . . . How can someone with such beauty be so diff’rent underneath from what I see?
We must remember that beauty is only skin deep, it’s what is within the heart that truly matters. February 10, 2021

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Date: 2/14/2021 10:05:00 AM
Yes, sometimes deep within is so much hurt and shame that no one wants to approach that beautiful rose. Sara
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/15/2021 4:40:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Sara, I appreciate it. John
Date: 2/10/2021 5:37:00 PM
True beauty comes from within- and then, shines on the outside. To find one holding both qualities, is a rare find indeed. Your thoughts caress gently around me. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Hugs, Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/10/2021 6:15:00 PM
A rare find indeed, someone beautiful on the inside as well as the outside, like finding a diamond in a pile of coal. Sometimes we are just blessed. Thank you for your support, Brandy. Hugs, John
Date: 2/10/2021 10:42:00 AM
Sometimes things aren't what we think they are until we get closer, you're right though John it what is within your heart that truly counts. Hope you're well. Tom
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/10/2021 10:51:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments, Tom, so many times we are attracted only by the beauty we cna see and don't take time to truly know the person. Stay well my friend. John
Date: 2/10/2021 4:41:00 AM
I love this... it's such a beauty in itself - as you say, within the words... love it. God bless you so ... with love and prayers, Gina
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/10/2021 5:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gina, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, John

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