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Shaking Hands With Fate

We sit across a table eating Pho; two old friends, sharing food and stories of our little worlds Of my new love; my old projects of his sweetheart; his old business the dross men use to hide our hearts We timidly tiptoe towards truth; tiny steps in the deepening dance of two old friends, carefully sharing We talk of our ageing families; my father's dementia and his mother's parkinson's He hesitates to use the chop sticks that he's been so proficient with and tentatively, he takes a fork His hand absently stirs the soup with the fork, as we dance away, carefully, back to our little worlds I feel the shaking of his hand as we shake hands goodbye and I wish that I could forget

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Date: 7/16/2015 3:49:00 PM
'as we dance away, carefully, back to our little worlds' dementia is simply heartbreaking - so vividly descriptive David it brought me to tears:-(hugs Jan xx 7
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/16/2015 7:36:00 PM
My dad's brother died of Parkinson's and mum has memory issues caused by a fall so I found it very moving in so many ways:-( hugs jan xx
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David Brown
Date: 7/16/2015 7:25:00 PM
Thank you Jan - it's a true story. Dementia is indeed a terrible thing. My friend however, just found out he has Parkinson's as does his mother...which made me think of the irony...sometimes, not remembering would be a blessing. Thank you for your very kind comments

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