Shakespeare In 2023

Doth thou, my dear, recall us still?
Tho' years quietly hasten'd on.
Do doves yet fly near Towne's Mill
and carts clang up'n cobblestone?

Are thou still light as summer's day,
with golden lockes o'er which I wept?
Did winter steal thy look of May?
For I was gone, and long I slept.

A dream this be and quite strange;
else I have fall'n, hit my head.
Village has known a bit'r change,
while April vanish'd from my stead.

Doth life but dwell within a rhyme,
ere each day lost to heedless time?

January 6, 2023
for "Shakespeare in 2023" contest
by Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Roper Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 12:33 PM
Awesome verse, Ann . Congratulations on your 2nd place win in Anoucheka's contest.
Peck Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 3:03 PM
Thanks, Eve! It was a fun contest!
George Avatar
January 10, 2023 at 8:19 PM
Shakespeare is eager to know if things are the same as in the 16th and 17th centuries when he lived and wrote his immortal plays and verse. The concluding lines, I love so much. This is a poem, I am sure will be ranked high. All the Best, Ann!
Peck Avatar
January 11, 2023 at 5:03 PM
Dear Valsa, poet of high esteem, thanks for your comments. I'm loving your poems!
Ashley Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 11:47 AM
Oh Ann, this is truly wonderful! You've capture the present-day spirit of the Bard with poetic finesse. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my friend.. ~Susan
Peck Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 1:45 PM
Thank you so very much, Susan. It was such fun to pretend to be the Bard :)
Horsman Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 4:41 PM
'I'm wearing my heart on my sleeve,' as i read this gem, Ann. You take one back, better still you bring him into the future. Love it...Harry
Peck Avatar
January 11, 2023 at 4:58 PM
Thanks, Harry. I shouldn't have been so hard on the Master.
Slaughter Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 10:56 AM
Ann, I trow that this will be a very strong contender in the contest. BOL!
Lawless Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 7:56 PM
"who mocketh me in metered rhyme?" The Bard
Peck Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 9:30 AM
HaHa! T'was I, m'lord--while pass'n time!
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