Shaken Up

SHAKEN UP

The vortex sucked
me into the globe.
  shaken, distressed
pounding on the confines
of the glass.
   the snow n-e-v-e-r stops.

Music lifts,
   from the bowels
of this new world —
the humor of “it’s
    a small world”

Suddenly the snow alights
at my feet, i
see creatures smaller than
  me,
with little hammers,
        constructing toys.

My full tilt
  laughter, fogs
up the glass,
     annoys the tiny
men and women
at their chores.

Santa Claus,
  yes S-a-n-t-a,
explodes from out of an office door
              “What’s all this?!”

Suddenly swept
   from off his feet
     (and mine too)

When once upright again,
  he holds his fingers to his head,
“I’ve a giant headache. If this storm continues…”
   and his words trail off as he slams shut
the door.

I rub my eyes. did i really see all that.

  “So, ahem,” I say,
“you’re elves.”

“Oh my, you’re a bright one,”
    as the head elf rushes by.

The tiny giggles light up the tiny space.

“I don’t know how I got here.
 Has this ever happened before?”

Again, the tiny giggles illuminate
   the North Pole, in
this musical jar of snow.

“Here, “
     the head elf shoves
a warm mug, a beautiful mug
in my hand, “drink this. It
             will clear your head,
                   warm you up.”

“You’ll be around
      until Christmas.
You will ride with Santa
   back to your world,
beyond the glass. Your instructions
                                   are here.”

He hands me a handsomely wrapped scroll.
   I read it as chocolate heaven runs
        down my throat. i
              lick my lips.

The scroll says:

Welcome Guest! You must have been bad, the worst, to end up at the end of your world. We won’t judge but you must figure it out or on Christmas Eve you will get stuck in the glass. Not the globe, mind you, but the actual glass — between worlds. Enjoy the amenities, search for clues, stay out of Santa’s way and out of his booze.
Am I dream’n? i don’t even know who i am. i’m shaken, cold, sweating, afraid. ...this is very bad! Suddenly the song, He knows if you’re sleeping, He knows if you’re awake. He knows if you’ve been good or bad… This time as the glass globe shakes, I am in a different place — my childhood, sneaking, snotty, reeking naughty and all out jealous, haughty... i steal her prized possession — this s-n-o-w globe. tears run down the glass as if it was my friend’s eye. my best friend the one i lost when i was nine. now i remember. now i must figure out what to do. all the elves, taking a break glare at me. 12/2/2019 Stuck in a Christmas Globe Poetry Contest Sponsor: Bobby May Santa Claus Is Coming To Town Songwriters: COOTS J FRED / GILLESPIE HAVEN

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Date: 12/17/2019 12:35:00 PM
- Sorry late response ... Congratulations on your winning poem, Kim :) - Christmas is approaching ... and I wish you and your loved ones a wonderful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/16/2019 3:11:00 PM
There's a lot of imagination and creativity in that snow globe poem! Congratulations on your win! Fantastic.
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Date: 12/13/2019 4:53:00 AM
Sincere congratulations on your win in Bobby's Christmas Globe contest, Kim - keep up the great work, my friend! Blessings! :o) <3
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Date: 12/12/2019 11:17:00 PM
Kim congratulations on your win!;)
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Date: 12/12/2019 7:00:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem KIm
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Date: 12/12/2019 6:54:00 PM
An epic poem, Km. Creativity unleashed! Congrats on your win in the contest with this magnificent opus. Here's to an escape! ~ Harry Hu Dini
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Date: 12/5/2019 4:45:00 AM
What a gorgeous gorgeous write. It reads like a play!
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Date: 12/3/2019 8:24:00 AM
Kim, this is fantastic! I want to see this Christmas movie!
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Date: 12/2/2019 2:06:00 PM
What a magical scene. Thanks for sharing this Kim. Best of luck in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2019 2:24:00 PM
Thank you, Greg! :)
Date: 12/2/2019 8:34:00 AM
It never pays to be naughty. : ) Really well done Kim. This was a very creative take on the contest. I could feel the fear and confusion and see everything as if I were watching it on television. Best wishes in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2019 2:25:00 PM
Glad you perceived the emotions! Thank you, my friend!
Date: 12/2/2019 8:20:00 AM
Wow! What a creative poem written for this theme! It looks like a winner to me , Kim! Well done ! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2019 2:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi!
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