Shake Rattle and Roll

Sit stubborn on your perch of heat
be still until I’m gone
my vigil won’t induce one note
toward your explosive song.

My absence sets your trigger
faint gurgling a shake
until great belches power on
a steamy shrill above the watery quake.

I’ll not come a running
because you give the nod
now YOU’LL go unheeded
I hear just my i-pod.

©Kathryn McLoughlin Collins
May 5, 2012

this was written for a poetry challenge which was to write a poem about an unnamed subject and have the reader guess.
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Bickerstaffe Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 10:21 AM
I love the way your themes and presentations are always so different. With you I can always expect the unexpected! A super piece!! Love, Keith
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 9:41 PM
oh, yes., the one i actually guessed at the other website. I am feeling good reading the comments,I think a few people actually didn't know what it was, and I guessed it the first time!!!
Austin Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 9:51 AM
Is it a steam boat whistle? Love, Dave
Collins Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 7:39 AM
You know by now - a whistling tea kettle. By the way it's red.
Cornwall Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 8:30 PM
wonderful poem Kathryn..Patrick
Collins Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 7:39 AM
Thanks Patrick.
Wesley Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 7:05 PM
Hi Kathryn, sounds like your giving someone the bum's rush here. At least an I-pod doesn't talk back. Luv, Lizzie
Collins Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 7:48 AM
Hi - It's just a plain ole whistling tea kettle.
Horsman Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 10:46 AM
this is a very clever written poem, Kathryn, and a joy to read, harry
Collins Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 7:49 AM
Thanks Harry.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 10:13 AM
Yep! ...serves him right!! Sweet cadence and rhyme, and a whole lotta fun. Great job, Kathryn!! Best wishes, Keith
Collins Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 7:49 AM
I just hope my tea kettle doesn't boil out and melt.
Whitehead Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 9:33 AM
I think you did an excellent job here Kathryn. This was quite a challenge. I like it very much.
Collins Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 7:50 AM
Thanks Josie.
Macmillan Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 9:01 AM
THE KETTLE! Awesome, Kathy-dear...steamy shrill, watery quake my fave. I will have to try this! Thanks for all your lovely comments... I know you are not a blog regular, but you may want to check out the poetry soup newsletter and add a little something about yourself. I am trying to get us to know about more about each other. I will be making this a weekly "feature." Hope you have a good weekend. Cheers, Cyndi
Collins Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 7:50 AM
Hi Cyndi - I'm a little technologically behind. I could figure out how to comment. love, Kathy
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