Notes About The Poem
Shakabukued—The term "shakubuku" translates from Japanese as "to break and subdue." It is primarily used in the context of Buddhist teachings, particularly within the Nichiren sect. Shakubuku refers to a method of expounding Buddhism aimed at suppressing others' illusions and subduing their attachment to error or evil. Additionally, it can mean to strictly refute someone's incorrect views concerning the teachings of the Buddha—wiki
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2/17/26 6th Place
conversions untrue
journeying thru false dharmas~
halts shakabuku

SHAKABUKUED
To have lived this life I’ve led and followed, to have given, to have received, and not forgotten what trespassed, remorse has ran its course. Our ancients DNA, and futures generation from me giving way. It was what on earth I was born for. Choices have been made, patterns set, pounded dogs on obstructed pavement met, trekking through jungle’s wilds, and massive labyrinths. I am not the same as before, and possibly ever shall be again. It all seems small. A dimensional me lingers, as well it should, as a reminder of the unfree, mazed in confinements adrift. I sit in a cloud amongst the other clouds, weighing heavily, measuring my myself, maturity, legacy, releasing ego's symptoms, until I acknowledge me, [karma] slowly shall I ascend into its black hole. Set in perpetual motion, an abstract me. I look back with open eyes, wide awake and I begin a new journey, a journey
of all journeys. To keep on path...
...let open your eyes
self-redeemed, shakabuked _/\_
broken & subdued
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