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Shaft of Light- For Contest

Black clouds ever surrounding me But look, a bright ray of light I see From where does this light appear Has it come from far or from near A million thoughts enter my mind A sign from above, that I’m behind Quick explanations though, never pass Nor do a thousand, I have grown crass About this shaft of light what can be told I don’t know now, maybe when I am old Desire to know, imbedded since our youth Philosophy teaches there really is no truth Penned 2/2/2013 Contest: Shaft of Light

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Date: 2/2/2013 10:55:00 PM
I like..I like a lot! Well done :)
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Wayland Bunch
Date: 2/2/2013 10:58:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely comments. Actually I have caught two errors one in each poem. Thanks for such inspiring comments.
Date: 2/2/2013 5:51:00 AM
You've got a good shot at it with this one, my good friend! Well penned... good luck!
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Wayland Bunch
Date: 2/2/2013 12:06:00 PM
Thanks so much for your kind words.

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