Shady Dance

shady dance of clouds against the burgeoning sun — catch Spring in my step 2/26/2020

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/28/2020 11:51:00 AM

Everyone is in the mood for Spring - great write and well penned - Chris is right, you can choose any topic and make a phenomenal poem. Blessings my friend KIM, jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/28/2020 2:15:00 PM

You are so nice! Thank you, Jennifer!

Chris Green

Date: 2/27/2020 11:02:00 AM

You are so good at whatever you choose to write. This was beautiful.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2020 11:03:00 AM

And you are one of the nicest if not the nicest poets on this sight! Thank you, my friend!

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/26/2020 2:48:00 PM

Sweet, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2020 3:46:00 PM

Thanks, Line!

Jan Allison

Date: 2/26/2020 1:18:00 PM

superb imagery Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2020 3:46:00 PM

Thank you, Jan!

Sandra Adams

Date: 2/26/2020 1:17:00 PM

Beautiful Kim. Glad you got to see some sun. We are still dismal with more rain coming tonight ...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2020 3:47:00 PM

Just in a painting, dear Sandra! Have to find color somewhere. :)