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Shadows Under Silent Moon - Hiku 5

Written: May 21, 2025, for contest by Brian Strand ***************** * u n d e r m o o n l it h u s h * two s h a d o w s l e a n into o n e * *—* stars h o l d their s i l e n c e * */ ** \ */

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Date: 5/22/2025 2:47:00 PM
Lookey, lookey at the style we are all toying with as Brian initiated, sought and validated. I wonder if he is aware of what he's done! Love how you created sparkles, playfully tossed to dazzle us. Just scrolled and noted this placed. Congrats on that, and, like children, may we all continue to delight in playing "creative" with Haikus, and other ... CayCay (oh, content seems to have become a bit of an afterthought, but I want to say, this content is beautiful.)
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Date: 5/22/2025 12:33:00 PM
Congratulations dear poet on your top placement in this contest with with a pleasant presentation of "two shadows" on a starry moonlit night. Wish you a pleasant day.
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Date: 5/22/2025 10:59:00 AM
What a creative/fun write you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away..........
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Date: 5/22/2025 10:23:00 AM
Very nice! Congrats!
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Date: 5/22/2025 2:13:00 AM
Magnificent layout with this haiku. Best for a win.
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Date: 5/21/2025 9:35:00 PM
Simply beautiful ! Even stars fall silent in amazement or may be as they do not want to disturb the lovers in their most ecstatic moment of union. Wonderful pictorial representation. All the Best dear Lasaad.
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Date: 5/21/2025 4:52:00 PM
This is so romantic, Sotto! A fav- "and I'll hold my peace" :)
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