Shadows of Love

Soft Sapphic shadows of love Lips linked in loves deep passion Bronze bodies burn with desire Tongues tantalise With Whispered words hearts unite Two transform to become one In Eternal ecstasy Flying forever Written 17/02/15 Too late for entry to Dodoitsu competition
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Manassian Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 10:07 PM
I've been here before, but I'm back to leave a word or two. Shane, thanks for being such a wonderful person. You help me cope. That's a precious gift. A very precious gift. Blessings. Hugs
Manassian Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 10:22 PM
:) How sweet!
Cooper Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 10:19 PM
It is my pleasure to have a friend of your stature my Enchantress. You are a beautifully complex talented woman. And you will remain in my heart till hell freezes over. love Shane xxx
Pinet Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 10:12 AM
Wonderful work with great thought given to the subject mater as it is gently unfolded for the readers delight. Emile #7
La France Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 6:31 AM
Shane, your poem is beautiful and a winner to me, full of deep love and emotions, well done and thanks for visiting oh the tears and for sharing that wonderful quote, I needed to write that poem, the tears and the pain, poured from my pen ~~
Cooper Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 8:07 AM
My friend I am glad you stopped in. Grief is so hard to conquer but if combined with self recrimination it is an unbearable burden. You must forgive yourself first to be able to heal your pain of loss. Again I ask you to remember that you are loved by many people here. You are not alone. Be safe my friend, All my love Shane
Kendrick Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 12:48 PM
Passionate work..Sara
Cooper Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 12:55 AM
Thank you Sara, I try to be true to my heart when I write and my pen will follow where it leads. love Shane xxx
Cooper Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 7:19 AM
You are right about that little Ninja Naj, some of the poems I have written have Been created word by word while I did half a dozen things at work. It does not help with the flow. Love your friend Shane xxx
Manassian Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 6:12 AM
OH MY OH MY OH MY!!!! This one has me flying high. Too bad it's too late. It would have rocketed to the top. Hugs
Cooper Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 7:39 AM
My sweet enchantress I am so happy that you have visited my poem and that you like it. Praise from you is worth so much to me. When I started to write it just felt that the poem wanted to go this way and I thought it time to shake the tree and see what fell out. Take care of yourself my precious friend All my love Shane xxx
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 5:40 AM
Females flying forever! Beautifully penned Shane!
Cooper Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 6:58 AM
I am glad you have visited my poetry Connie and that you liked the twist, it just seemed to be where the poem wanted me to to go so I walked along with it. Also most of the romantic writes seemed to be rather straight laced even if they are racy. And I always say each to his or her own so we fly on! Love Shane xxx
Allison Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 4:46 AM
Dripping with passion Shane - love the alliteration - shame you missed the contest:-( Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
Allison Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 7:07 AM
Its happened to me several times Shane I just post it and try and make sure I get the next contest write done in time but sometimes life issues simply take over:-) Hugs Jan xx
Cooper Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 6:17 AM
I finally found my words again. There were three spots still open when I started the poem yesterday but I got busy and missed out. Not to matter I enjoyed writing it. Love Shane
Smith Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 3:58 AM
Excellent use of alliteration my friend.... Cheers
Cooper Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 6:26 AM
Thanks Tim all the words flowed together so well it was a pleasure to write. Love Shane
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