Shadows of a City Gone Wrong

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Written: June 23, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Anthony Biaanco ******************* Growling, arguing, cursing, and screams, They nod to chase after a dollar, a dream. Trapped in clichés, similar to urban swine, Lost residents of the suburbs stand in line. The city of brotherhood and sisterhood, Racially diverse cultures and schools stood. Philly cheese-steaks, hoagies, and homicides, Cocaine vampires succumb side by side. On filthy streets, zombies and dogs coexist, In Fishtown, hunt for meat to eat or a twist. They need medicine and shoes for their feet. Litter chokes Kensington Ave replete street. They say Oxy and fentanyl are to blame. Perhaps it's genetics, wrapped in shame. Predisposed to a life completely polluted— From the moment of birth, deeply rooted. Some were once rich, now penniless, With only a rat and their mute distress. A raw middle-class suburbia faces bruise, Zombies cradle meth and crack misuse. They nod, dip, freeze, and sway— Defying gravity, they struggle to stay. Despite its fame, the land has failed, A monolithic trial, where hopes derailed? Former star-spangled grandeur has faded. Betsy Ross famed flag thread is jaded. A horrible scene for a tourist to behold, A ghostly flat-backed female zombie, cold. Kensington Ave in the city's northeast— Zombies, dogs, and lost souls feast. Two-legged canines in an endless sludge. Life is grim in this dope-fueled grudge.

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Date: 7/26/2025 6:02:00 AM
This is both poignant and painful to read. The idea that life is so grim & hopeless for so many of this people that drug is their only escape is so sad - even more so if the scene here might have once been grand. A worthy top place, for sure.
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Date: 6/27/2025 9:48:00 PM
This is a frightening picture of a city and a people who are lost to drugs and dopes. The City has been famous for its cosmopolitan culture and flourishing business centers, but it has another side too where people live like zombies. Their state is pathetic......"They nod, dip, freeze, and sway— Defying gravity, they struggle to stay. Despite its fame, the land has failed, A monolithic trial, where hopes derailed? " You have powerfully delineated their nightmarish existence under dopes. So miserably sad. I am sure, this is going to be a top winner.
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Date: 6/25/2025 12:34:00 AM
Oh my gosh, so horrific. Your pen captured so well, and oh I wish somehow this were just the penning of a horror movie, but no. I have been seeing them too, in what was once the upper end of town where it was considered a good part of the city. I notice where I live the whole nightmare growing like cancer, but why??! Poor humanity, where did we go wrong, it is so dreadfully sad. They really are like zombies. You captured so well the nightmarish reality.
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Date: 6/24/2025 6:25:00 PM
This is so horrible. You wrote of it with such emotion and clarity.
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Date: 6/24/2025 10:57:00 AM
A vivid poetic snapshot of an area where it is not counselled to tread alone, particularly at late hours. Another of your masterly gem, dear poet. Wish you the best in the contest.
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