Shadows

Shadows with the setting sun shadowed lovers became one tale of romance spun

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Skat A

Date: 11/7/2015 9:15:00 PM

lovely SKAT

Lin Lane
Date: 11/8/2015 7:22:00 AM

Many thanks, SKAT.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/27/2015 1:32:00 PM

Very clever Lin one of my favorites. Thanks for sharing this clever write.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/28/2015 8:11:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Michael. Glad you paid me a visit.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/27/2015 10:21:00 AM

Marvelously romantic! A seven, dear Lin!

Lin Lane
Date: 10/27/2015 10:27:00 AM

Thank you, Demetrios. You are the master of romanticism, so this remark from you is an honor... so is your 7.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/27/2015 9:11:00 AM

Oh! so lovely, Lin! ... a romantic haiku born at sunset! very creative. ~ Regards // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 10/27/2015 12:41:00 PM

Have just read your other comment...what a coincidence...leaving that door ajar...is it telepathy?!! ~ paul

Lin Lane
Date: 10/27/2015 9:24:00 AM

Many thanks, Paul. Sometimes such lovely thoughts come unbidden to our minds. We must remember to leave the door ajar. I appreciate your comments. ~ Lin ~

Dalia Shahein

Date: 10/26/2015 2:54:00 PM

Beautiful poem my dear...

Lin Lane
Date: 10/26/2015 3:11:00 PM

Thank you very much, Dalia, for reading and for your kind comment. ~ Lin ~