Shadows

'Tween the shades of gloam and night
roam shadows cold and deep
Cavorting along the garden walls
'neath the eves they do seep

Pulling life from which they touch
removing the essecense of being
Growing bolder and darker still
when clouds course over moonbeams

Roses quell beneath their touch
becoming grey and smolder
The ivy blends into the trellis
stone statues look years older

Inching along the spreading branches
of the tree that taps at window panes
Melding with the leaves and bark
becoming your night time bane

Shadows tease the back door catch
then move on to your window sill
Melting in to your own bedroom
sneaking about as they will

Dark mouths stretch on the walls
and yawn across your quilted bed
Teeth reach out for your toes
while fingers want your head

Shadows tickle the closet doors
and weep beneath the chair
Puddling underneath your bed
You swear hands are touching your hair

Courage you gather as you quake
bit by bit you garner strength
Off you cast the covers fast
your eyes you rub and blink

For there the sun is streaming in
and chasing the night shadows out
You can almost hear their angry screams
of defeat as the sun spreads out

Your brain gives a sigh of relief
as it realizes you are now sun encased
But then new panic does set in
as you recall night can't be escaped

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/5/2011 1:58:00 PM
this poem bings me back to when I was a child with fears of what was lurking in the dark. good read
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Date: 2/18/2011 9:44:00 AM
Paula, I just went to soup but maybe you are still writing to me, so meanwhile, I read this poem of yours. WOw,it is a really good one for use of personifcation and describing that terror a kid might get by dwelling on shadows. Very descriptive, Paula. Now let me go check soupmail again.
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Date: 2/18/2011 9:19:00 AM
Paula. soupmail!!
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Date: 2/16/2011 3:13:00 PM
That was some nightmare..Enjoyed reading your work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara
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