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Shadows

life unfair to suffer deeds of others carrying the blame for those who carry none a heavy burden to bear sadness descends in black and white shadows create a darkness within

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Phil Capitano

Date: 2/16/2019 7:34:00 AM

Life is unfair but this poem is a gem. I love the etheree form. Have a great day.

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/16/2019 7:52:00 AM

Thank you, Phil a great comment, So glad that you think it is a gem!

Bobby May

Date: 2/16/2019 6:32:00 AM

Exactly well done!

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/16/2019 7:44:00 AM

Thank you, Bobby for your kind comment.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/15/2019 12:28:00 PM

So true and well written Sandy :)

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/15/2019 4:00:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/15/2019 11:38:00 AM

This poem has a airy feel to it. I like the alliteration of it. air, suffer, others, and sadness, shadow strike me in particular.

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/15/2019 4:01:00 PM

Thanks for your input and perception.