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SHADOW OF TEARS

Saturday was our one day,
seeing our friends and laughing.
Couple on wood skating floor,
around we loved to go~go.
He held me so very tight,
as the fun music played on.

He asked me to marry him.

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Karen Jones

January 28, 2026 at 5:31 AM

What a beautiful and romantic poem! Enjoyed! Good luck in the contest!

Karen Jones

January 28, 2026 at 1:59 PM

Well your season with him created beautiful memories and thanks for sharing!

Paula Goldsmith

January 28, 2026 at 11:46 AM

"Thank You" for stopping to read/write. Also Thank You For Your, Good luck in the contest. Glad you found my fun "SHADOW OF TEARS" to be, a beautiful and romantic poem. We did Not marry. We moved away. I never saw him again. We went to school for 5 years together. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Hope Today and Everyday Is Filled With Blessings as You Write Away.................

Sotto Poet

January 26, 2026 at 11:23 AM

A moment etched in memory, wrapped in the tender embrace of romance...truly suitable for the contest. Beautifully written, Blessings

Paula Goldsmith

January 26, 2026 at 12:29 PM

"Thank You" for stopping to read/write. Glad you found my fun "SHADOW OF TEARS" to be, Beautifully written. We did Not marry. We moved and I never saw him after going to school for 5 years together. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Hope Today and Everyday Is Filled With Blessings as You Write Away.................

Victor Buhagiar

January 26, 2026 at 1:50 AM

And may they live happily ever after.

Paula Goldsmith

January 26, 2026 at 8:49 AM

"Thank You" for stopping to read/write. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "SHADOW OF TEARS" write. I did Not marry him. We moved and I never saw him after going to school for 5 years together. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Hope Today and Everyday Is Filled With Blessings as You Write Away.................

Joseph May

January 25, 2026 at 2:08 PM

A moment to remember, Nicely penned, Blessings

Paula Goldsmith

January 26, 2026 at 8:48 AM

"Thank You" for stopping to read/write. Glad you found my fun "SHADOW OF TEARS" to be, Nicely penned. We did Not marry. We moved and I never saw him after going to school for 5 years together. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Hope Today and Everyday Is Filled With Blessings as You Write Away.................

sara Etgen-Baker

January 24, 2026 at 2:22 PM

oh so romantic...perfect for the contest

Paula Goldsmith

January 25, 2026 at 10:25 AM

"Thank You" for stopping to read/write. Glad you found my fun "SHADOW OF TEARS" to be, oh so romantic. I did Not marry him. We moved and I never saw him after going to school for 5 years together. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Hope Today and Everyday Is Filled With Blessings as You Write Away.................

Sara Kendrick

January 24, 2026 at 2:06 PM

Ahh!! Romantic work for the contest. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

January 25, 2026 at 10:24 AM

Paige Hind

January 22, 2026 at 5:33 PM

Very romantic. <3

Paula Goldsmith

January 25, 2026 at 10:23 AM

"Thank You" for stopping to read/write. Glad you found my fun "SHADOW OF TEARS" to be, Very romantic. I did Not marry him. We moved and I never saw him after going to school for 5 years together. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Hope Today and Everyday Is Filled With Blessings as You Write Away.................

Jay Narain

January 22, 2026 at 10:16 AM

Cute poem.

Paula Goldsmith

January 25, 2026 at 10:22 AM

"Thank You" for stopping to read/write. Glad you found my fun "SHADOW OF TEARS" to be a, Cute poem. I did Not marry him. We moved and I never saw him after going to school for 5 years together. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Hope Today and Everyday Is Filled With Blessings as You Write Away.................

Kim Rodrigues

January 22, 2026 at 8:53 AM

How cute, Paula! Your writing always joyful!

Paula Goldsmith

January 25, 2026 at 10:21 AM

"Thank You" for stopping to read/write. Glad you found my fun "SHADOW OF TEARS" to be, cute. I did Not marry him. We moved and I never saw him after going to school for 5 years together. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Hope Today and Everyday Is Filled With Blessings as You Write Away.................

Joseph P. DiMino

January 22, 2026 at 8:48 AM

My, you are the romantic today! Lovely read. Thank you for sharing.

Paula Goldsmith

January 25, 2026 at 10:19 AM

"Thank You" for stopping to read/write. Glad you found my fun "SHADOW OF TEARS" to be a, Lovely read. Guess when I wrote this, I was in a romantic mood. I did Not marry him. We moved and I never saw him after going to school for 5 years together. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Hope Today and Everyday Is Filled With Blessings as You Write Away.................

Paula Goldsmith

January 22, 2026 at 7:42 AM

"SHADOW OF TEARS" ~ Date Written:1/22/2026 ~ Written By Human Poet...............

SHADOW OF TEARS

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