Shadow Girls

Her clothes, casually worn, she sashays with ease of skill. And in a dress, stained and torn, smiles, for a drink, or a pill. She enters bars like a storm, she's the queen of the alley. And flaunting her fluid form, she seeks her nightly tally. Suggestive and exotic, she starts with slow gyrations. And slips into erotic, offering sweet temptations. Neon lights cast shadow-girls, where tears of loneliness spill. And in high heels and cheap pearls, she sells a sexual thrill. But deep within, she's a fake, Reality mocks her ways. And laughs echo in her wake, while time steals her youthful days.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gauthier Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 3:59 PM
This is a beauty. Love "queen of the alley" and "Yet deep within she's a fake, reality mocks her ways. And laughs echo in her wake as time steals her youthful days."
Shahein Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 6:36 PM
This is so real you can represent reality in a breath taking way....intelligent poem indeed....hugs / / :) dalia
Pinet Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 10:21 AM
Thanks again Dalia, your visits are truly appreciated. Emile.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 5:15 PM
Vivid and arresting... I especially like your final verse, the summation of these shadow girls and their livelihood. Superb flow and abab rhyming. Well done my friend! Best wishes Keith.
Pinet Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 5:26 PM
Thank you Keith, you continue to honor me with your praise. Emile
A  Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 10:21 AM
so true... enjoyed. SKAT
Pinet Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 8:33 PM
Thank you so much SKAT, I appreciate it. Emile.
Leake Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 1:04 AM
Another well written poem Emile, About the seedy world out there which is all so true!! Best Wishes Kevin
Pinet Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 9:09 AM
Thanks Kevin, I appreciate your visits. Emile.
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 4:19 PM
it is such a seedy world that they frequent often fueled by drink and drug addiction - an excellent write Emile I love the fact you tackle subjects other people shy away from:-) hugs Jan xx 7
Pinet Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 9:10 AM
Thanks so much Jan, I appreciate your encouragement. Emile.
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