Shadow Games

The arms of the forest from dawn to dusk a child’s game with shadows sun shifts over and under

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 2/15/2024 1:34:00 PM

Very beautiful read!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2024 6:01:00 PM

Thank you so much, my friend!

Paige Hind

Date: 2/14/2024 4:55:00 PM

A lot said with a few words. Love your take on this subject!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2024 8:39:00 PM

Thank you, Paige!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/13/2024 12:24:00 PM

Now you have me thinking of times I spent in the woods as a kid. The effect of the canopy on the light filtering through makes a lot of impressions on the ground and on the way we perceive things.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2024 8:39:00 PM

Nature is so fun! :)

Silent One

Date: 2/13/2024 12:11:00 PM

Great kimo kim... maybe that can be your new nickname.. Kimo Kim..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2024 8:38:00 PM

LOL! Or Kimmy-Kim ;)

Jim Slaughter

Date: 2/13/2024 11:11:00 AM

I love the imagery of "the arms of the forest", Kim...and the rest ain't bad, either.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2024 8:38:00 PM

Thanks, Jim ;)

Valsa George

Date: 2/13/2024 4:56:00 AM

Wow... such a lively image! It's so beautiful to watch such a lively dance of the shadows....

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2024 8:36:00 PM

Thank you, dear Valsa!

Brian Sambourne

Date: 2/12/2024 7:31:00 PM

Terrific personification in your first line to draw the reader in. Grand image of a shifting sun, shadows and a child's imagination. Excellent poem. Be well. Brian

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2024 8:41:00 PM

Thank you, Brian!