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Shadow

You always walk behind me when I walk alone Come lets explore each others life stories How much you bear on your back You make your appearance for hours tonight You are way better at carrying sorrow The shadows that fill me, uncovering each others secrets Forever imprinted on common ground Why don’t you reveal to me your dreams and aspirations? Because tonight me and the stars will be watching you The moon shedding it’s light upon us Guiding two sets of footsteps With you slowly moving to my side To vanish without saying a word at sunrise 18.3.2021 It only seems that way

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Date: 3/21/2021 12:46:00 AM
"Why don’t you reveal to me your dreams and aspirations?" This is so much fun, because our shadow self does seem to have her own mind.
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Carol Mitra
Date: 3/21/2021 3:44:00 AM
Yes indeed she has....she appears and then disappears at her own free will....much love :)
Date: 3/18/2021 10:47:00 AM
Your poem deep in thoughts--enjoyed the dialogue Carol. All the best.
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Carol Mitra
Date: 3/18/2021 6:53:00 PM
Thank you dear Vijay....much appreciated :)
Date: 3/18/2021 9:22:00 AM
I loved the flow of your poem very much, Carol. Nice work.
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Carol Mitra
Date: 3/18/2021 10:00:00 AM
Thank you....much appreciated :)
Date: 3/18/2021 8:44:00 AM
- Words are not always necessary ... a lovely poem, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Carol Mitra
Date: 3/18/2021 9:59:00 AM
Thanks dear Anne-Lise much love :)

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