Shades of Blue

As dawn’s first light appears in eastern skies
and paints the heaven’s dome in hues of pink,
I open sleepy eyes and realize
‘twas but a dream and life is out of sync.

Alone I lay upon this king size bed
where we would share our passions in the night,
and cuddle as we slumbered under spread,
but now these frigid sheets without delight.

In Autumn’s chill the heavens beckoned you,
and angels came to usher you away;
now here behind I’m left in shades of blue,
and seemingly alone in life’s decay.

The sadness from my eye rolls down my face,
and leaves a stain that time cannot erase.


February 5, 2019
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Marcum Wong Avatar
July 13, 2019 at 2:29 PM
The sentiments in this brilliant sonnet shoot straight through the heart. I know many can relate to this beautiful piece John. I love this poignant poem and am putting it into my Faves!Congratulations on your podium win! : ) xxoo
Gondolf Avatar
July 13, 2019 at 3:37 PM
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, Connie, I'm glad you liked tis poem. And thank you for the fav! All the best to you my dear friend. John
Adams Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 6:36 PM
I have a few of those stains myself. I am sure we all do! Beautifully penned. Congrats on your win :) hugs
Gondolf Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 8:26 PM
Show me someone without stains and I’ll show you someone who has never lived. Thank you for your thoughts, Sandy, I appreciate it. Hugs
Ravidas Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 6:25 PM
I had the double pleasure of reading this beautiful sonnet once again and seeing it took its rightful place in such a difficult competition. Best congratulations, John)
Gondolf Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 8:00 PM
Thanks so much, Kurt, I appreciate your comments.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 4:54 PM
Filled with imagery and color as well as sadness. Congratulations, John!
Gondolf Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 5:41 PM
Thank you so much, Kim.
Hamilton Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 4:30 PM
This is wonderful John congrats on a fine win!
Gondolf Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 4:43 PM
Thanks so much, John, and thanks for hosting this contest.
Ravidas Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 8:54 AM
That's what I call a true English sonnet.
Harmony Of The Soul Avatar
February 8, 2019 at 12:26 AM
Your storytelling within poetry is incredible. Very moving and emotional. (((Hugs)))
Gondolf Avatar
February 8, 2019 at 4:05 AM
Thank you for your wonderful comments, Berteena, I appreciate it. John
Kiser Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 9:24 PM
This is blue; but well penned. Congrats.
Gondolf Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 9:28 PM
Thank you, ML, I appreciate it. John
Nicole Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 7:59 PM
Congratulations John, on this win. ~ Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 8:01 PM
Thank you:). I appreciate you, Brandy.
Nicole Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 1:48 PM
Sometimes, the heart does feel lost in those moments once felt- loves sweet embrace. You capture this emotion so beautifully here, within your words my dear friend. ~ Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 5:23 PM
Thank you, Brandy, I appreciate it. John
Sands Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 11:01 AM
Well written John. I love the last 2 lines too :)
Gondolf Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 11:20 AM
Thank you, Heidi, I appreciate it, John
Onclaud Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 9:03 AM
your voice gives a distinct tone to love's demise... beautifully forlorn, john... huggs
Gondolf Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 9:06 AM
Thank you, Nette, I appreciate you. John
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