Shabbat Shalom

Sweet woman of Yahweh
sing to me
the Song of Songs
song of love
with kisses of wine.

I desire you
as Adam desired Eve
primordial affection
this knowledge I seek of you
my beloved one.

You are dark and beautiful
but grace alone is deceitful
beauty by itself ever so vain
you my love possess both
coupled with the fear of Yahweh
for you are deserved of praise.

I seek you
when dusk turns to night
Shabbat
the remnants of daylight
is in your eyes
leaving a kiss of the days memory.

Let us read from the books of Zohar
we are surrounded
by the Kabballat angels
where the Shabbat Queen
restores our love each week.

Oh my love
suspended are we
between the secular
and the sacred.

Almighty God has created
this wonderful world for us
in radiant shards and sparks of light
tonight we tend our souls.

Come let us embrace the Kaballah
I draw for you
a most wonderful mandala
for my darling 
 a dream is dreamed three times.

The evening is upon us
I see over your shoulder falling
your hair in serpent like ringlets
your black hair is twisted
to allure you to me
my new found lover
Shabbat Shalom....

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Date: 9/15/2013 7:43:00 PM
Beautifully done and with such passion I enjoyed this write and your words put to each line with such feeling.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 9/15/2013 7:48:00 PM
Hi Cheri, Thank you for your visit and kind compliment. Regards, Ken
Date: 9/13/2013 1:20:00 PM
wow this is a beautiful and an amazing write it flows sensual and very visual great write ken tina :)
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Date: 9/13/2013 1:24:00 PM
Hi Tina, Thank you kindly for the visit and beautiful comment. Regards, Ken
Date: 9/13/2013 6:51:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work based upon Song of Songs or Song of Solomon..Deeply emotive and passionate..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are uplifting..Sara
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Date: 9/13/2013 6:58:00 AM
Than you Sara for visiting...It is always a pleasure to read your work as well.. Ken
Date: 9/13/2013 6:30:00 AM
excellent piece top notch my old friend i really enjoyed
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Date: 9/13/2013 6:58:00 AM
Hey Liam, Thank you my good friend.. Ken
Date: 9/13/2013 4:39:00 AM
KEN!!!! This is so so amazing. So...beautiful, sensual, yet loving....Oh! To my favorites for sure!!! I keep the the Sabbath day....That is our day of worship. I have a book on making the Sabbath celebration a delight. References to Song of Solomon...All that you wrote made this an enthralling piece....WOW
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Date: 9/13/2013 4:45:00 AM
Hi Eileen, Thanks so much for stopping by and the beautiful compliment. Ken
Date: 9/13/2013 1:48:00 AM
- An "fairytale" so beautiful, Ken! - Have a nice Friday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/13/2013 4:35:00 AM
Hi Anne, Thank you for the visit and kindest comment. Ken
Date: 9/12/2013 5:31:00 PM
Nice mystical poem. I recently posted a Shabbat poem on this site,too. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/12/2013 5:38:00 PM
Hi Matthew, Thank you for the visit and comment. Regards, Ken
Date: 9/12/2013 3:22:00 PM
I give you a seven for this. It is very beautiful. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Date: 9/12/2013 3:26:00 PM
Hi Lucilla, Thank you for visiting and the kind comment.. Ken
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