Sexy Haiku

legs long and curvy
a waterfall's sensual  pain....
tongues bring release
















Written by Seren Roberts   11/11/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Allison Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 2:23 PM
woohoo you should put this in Richards sexy haiku contest:-) hugs jan xx
Williams Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 7:47 AM
hey Seren sexy indeed...David
Roberts Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 11:42 PM
Thanks David.
Nair Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 12:40 AM
Like Ruben says-speachless, can't get any sexier than this, Seren:) Jag
Roberts Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 3:25 AM
well done on your win, hmmm me thinks yours was sexier than mine. Still smiling over the comments though.....Seren
Duncan Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 5:06 AM
expect a this one u r done..u hve to get it..thumb up
Roberts Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 11:35 AM
Thank you Tim ....Seren
Fraser Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 4:25 PM
Dreamy & steamy, nice one Seren....
Roberts Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 11:35 AM
Thanks James, the comments have cracked me up laughing. Seren
Ellison Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 11:09 AM
I'm perspiring profusely! YIKES!
Roberts Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 5:27 PM
was waiting for your comment Jack lol u didnt disappoint me...Seren
Palmer Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 9:00 AM
yes ,yes ,yes,lol,nice write Seren
Roberts Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 12:32 PM
Lol Richard have changed a word. Merits another yes I think.....Seren
Falotico Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 5:46 AM
ahhhhh I love the Haiku and sweet images that follow.. hugs Michael
Roberts Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 6:26 AM
Thank you Michael. ...Seren
A   Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 5:45 PM
why would you want 2 re-look your haiku.. I love the sexy image you got going here. Well I'm not gonna look tooo long... LOL...I'm a female... But, the waterfalls, makes a good fall that screams OUCH!... xox~ the best of luck...pd
Roberts Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 12:41 AM
Thanks pd .... Seren
A  Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 4:39 PM
Good luck in the contest~SKAT~
Roberts Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 5:22 PM
lol Skat, thing this has caused a stir.....Seren
Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 4:28 PM
oh, now I see why all the comments!!! steamy steamy
Roberts Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 5:22 PM
omg Andrea I dont know what to say....Seren
Andresen Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 3:13 PM
I like your sexy haiku, hope you have time to read my sexy haiku Seren. - - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Roberts Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 5:23 PM
Sure will Anne Lise ... Good luck.... Seren
West Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 11:26 AM
WOW Seren, you past steamy, now inferno. Rollo
Roberts Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 11:51 AM
well a waterfall is quite a great place etc etc etc. ... Seren
A   Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 11:22 AM
now,,this is sexy... Seren, good luck in the contest...pd
Roberts Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 11:51 AM
imeant rollo's reply for you, now i am embarrassed ... Seren
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