Richard Lamoureux Poet ABC

Sexy Abc Ariel's Joy

Ariel breathes
Coming down
Ethereal fingers
Grasping him
Instantaneous joy

Kissing lucious mound 
New orgasmic pleasures
Quickening responses 
simultaneously transcending undulations
Voraciously wanting
xylophonically yelling zealots

To late for contest but I thought I would give it a go anyway.

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Red Fiery March 20, 2016 at 10:54 PM nevertheless...you won our hearts with this one too...this is surely a winner!!!! Whistle Whistle..! hugs Red Richard Lamoureux March 21, 2016 at 7:27 AM Thanks Red. Hugs back.

Andrea Dietrich October 1, 2015 at 4:03 PM Too bad it was late for the contest. Like Micahel says here, it's still a winner!! Richard Lamoureux October 4, 2015 at 8:03 AM Thanks Andrea.

Michael Tor October 1, 2015 at 3:04 PM Richard its better to be judge not by one person but all of us. Your peers and I think it's a winner. Very difficult accomplishment you have penned here. Richard Lamoureux October 4, 2015 at 8:03 AM You are kind Michael.

Eileen Manassian September 30, 2015 at 8:52 AM Still a vowel missing.....last line....first word..... Richard Lamoureux September 30, 2015 at 9:29 AM Thanks. ;0)

Kp Nunez September 30, 2015 at 6:35 AM Euphoric ABC, Rick. I had to smile at Casarah's comment. A luscious take on the theme. hugs! Richard Lamoureux September 30, 2015 at 8:15 AM Oops! I have changed it *lol*

Eve Roper September 29, 2015 at 10:08 PM Well you would have won!!! Perfect write, Richard, you got one vote from me. Hugs Eve Richard Lamoureux September 30, 2015 at 8:16 AM Ha ha, thanks Eve.

Alexis Y. September 29, 2015 at 9:54 PM Richard, this was good. You would have definitely placed with this steamy write! This theme wasn't an easy task.I know it wasn't easy because l tried. You did an outstanding job!:-)Alexis 7 Richard Lamoureux September 30, 2015 at 8:18 AM Thanks, I was most amazed reading Casarah's, she did it twice forward and once backwards.

Afolabi Muideen September 29, 2015 at 6:05 PM Lol! Your write is great RICHARD I love how it was constructed. the imagery depicted make your write seem voluptuous....love always.......A.M. Richard Lamoureux September 30, 2015 at 8:18 AM Thanks AM

Casarah Nance September 29, 2015 at 2:38 PM shame shame richard...uphoria...is Euphoria...but after all the mmm images that came before, I'm sure a few vowels get left behind in the heavy sighs...:) I'm glad you tried this...it was fun. :-) xx Richard Lamoureux September 30, 2015 at 8:20 AM Ha ha, I had planned to come back but you caught me before I did. I have changed it now.

Eileen Manassian September 29, 2015 at 1:48 PM Oh WOW! LA LA LACIOUS...all the way. The crescendo was resounding! ;) Too bad you missed the contest. Richard Lamoureux September 30, 2015 at 8:20 AM Oh well, it was still fun. Thanks Eileen.

Bl Devnath September 29, 2015 at 1:30 PM Nicely done about sexy Ariel. Sorry for you missed the contest. Loved always my lovely friend,bl Richard Lamoureux September 30, 2015 at 8:21 AM Yhanks BL. Richard Lamoureux September 30, 2015 at 8:21 AM Oops, I meant thanks.

Jan Allison September 29, 2015 at 9:25 AM this is steammmmyyy Richard - such a shame you missed the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Jan Allison September 29, 2015 at 9:34 AM Hope you had a wonderful time with your mum for her birthday:-) Hugs Jan xx Richard Lamoureux September 29, 2015 at 9:33 AM To busy on vacation. I feel bad I haven't been keeping up with my friends on the soup. Hugs back to you Jan.

Miraj Raha September 29, 2015 at 9:10 AM Damn you people make ABC look as easy as getting up from the bed,but I know its very difficult.This was indeed very sexy.loved it. Richard Lamoureux September 29, 2015 at 9:12 AM Thanks Miraj.