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Sexy Abc Ariel's Joy

Ariel breathes Coming down Ethereal fingers Grasping him Instantaneous joy Kissing lucious mound New orgasmic pleasures Quickening responses simultaneously transcending undulations Voraciously wanting xylophonically yelling zealots To late for contest but I thought I would give it a go anyway.

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Red Fiery

Date: 3/20/2016 10:54:00 PM

nevertheless...you won our hearts with this one too...this is surely a winner!!!! Whistle Whistle..! hugs Red

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/21/2016 7:27:00 AM

Thanks Red. Hugs back.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2015 4:03:00 PM

Too bad it was late for the contest. Like Micahel says here, it's still a winner!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/4/2015 8:03:00 AM

Thanks Andrea.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/1/2015 3:04:00 PM

Richard its better to be judge not by one person but all of us. Your peers and I think it's a winner. Very difficult accomplishment you have penned here.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/4/2015 8:03:00 AM

You are kind Michael.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/30/2015 8:52:00 AM

Still a vowel missing.....last line....first word.....

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/30/2015 9:29:00 AM

Thanks. ;0)

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/30/2015 6:35:00 AM

Euphoric ABC, Rick. I had to smile at Casarah's comment. A luscious take on the theme. hugs!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/30/2015 8:15:00 AM

Oops! I have changed it *lol*

Eve Roper

Date: 9/29/2015 10:08:00 PM

Well you would have won!!! Perfect write, Richard, you got one vote from me. Hugs Eve

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/30/2015 8:16:00 AM

Ha ha, thanks Eve.

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/29/2015 9:54:00 PM

Richard, this was good. You would have definitely placed with this steamy write! This theme wasn't an easy task.I know it wasn't easy because l tried. You did an outstanding job!:-)Alexis 7

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/30/2015 8:18:00 AM

Thanks, I was most amazed reading Casarah's, she did it twice forward and once backwards.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/29/2015 6:05:00 PM

Lol! Your write is great RICHARD I love how it was constructed. the imagery depicted make your write seem voluptuous....love always.......A.M.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/30/2015 8:18:00 AM

Thanks AM

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/29/2015 2:38:00 PM

shame shame richard...uphoria...is Euphoria...but after all the mmm images that came before, I'm sure a few vowels get left behind in the heavy sighs...:) I'm glad you tried this...it was fun. :-) xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/30/2015 8:20:00 AM

Ha ha, I had planned to come back but you caught me before I did. I have changed it now.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/29/2015 1:48:00 PM

Oh WOW! LA LA LACIOUS...all the way. The crescendo was resounding! ;) Too bad you missed the contest.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/30/2015 8:20:00 AM

Oh well, it was still fun. Thanks Eileen.

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/29/2015 1:30:00 PM

Nicely done about sexy Ariel. Sorry for you missed the contest. Loved always my lovely friend,bl

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/30/2015 8:21:00 AM

Yhanks BL.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/30/2015 8:21:00 AM

Oops, I meant thanks.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/29/2015 9:25:00 AM

this is steammmmyyy Richard - such a shame you missed the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 9/29/2015 9:34:00 AM

Hope you had a wonderful time with your mum for her birthday:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/29/2015 9:33:00 AM

To busy on vacation. I feel bad I haven't been keeping up with my friends on the soup. Hugs back to you Jan.

Miraj Raha

Date: 9/29/2015 9:10:00 AM

Damn you people make ABC look as easy as getting up from the bed,but I know its very difficult.This was indeed very sexy.loved it.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/29/2015 9:12:00 AM

Thanks Miraj.