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Sew Knitting In Her Mind She's Alone Getting Into the Conversation--

Darn, fleeting her soul life, sitting away. Rests snug against the wall twixt cabinet. 6 pots on the window sill, stalks daylight cross. The horizon two windows still six pots. Views of the apartment across the street. Minded I am nothing life’s so discreet. Alone-quiet-gray blue antique surround. Instilled Look N down as I AM knitting. Solitude and darning in mine silence. Just an alone, age lady, sitting in. My mind solitude knitting in silence As her blessed quiet time, so in her. Her subdued time her mind she's so alone. Yet getting into the conversation
10/18/23 Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2023© Placement in Contest 1st place For Get into the Conversation Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper Contest Judged: 10/20/2023 6:54:00 PM
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October 21, 2023 at 8:05 AM
I chose this one also.. Great take on the photo.. Congratulations on your win,,
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October 20, 2023 at 10:51 PM
James, I was tickle to see you've written for the contest. Thank you for taking part in the contest and congratulations on your win. Great description and feel in your poem. God bless you
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October 24, 2023 at 1:59 PM
Blessings u to you thanks Eve
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