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Severing Strings

Through poetry, I share my hopes and fears while exploring feelings fueled by tears. When conversing with lonely, broken hearts, my words comfort, merging with the sad parts. Severing strings that manipulate life, poetry can cut clean as any knife. Family and friends lay the foundations upon which I expose life's frustrations. Even though it's the first pleasure we share, knowing the value of a smile is rare. My poems speak of love, faith, hope, and pride; while reality mourns the thoughts that died. Through poems, l feel you, and you feel me, we share ears to listen and eyes to see. Poetry expresses mind, soul, and heart, anchoring thoughts before they drift apart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/2/2018 9:31:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Emile.
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Date: 6/3/2018 11:23:00 AM
Thank you Line, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/22/2018 10:58:00 AM
Congratulation on this wonderful well written write ... Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/22/2018 12:05:00 PM
Thanks so much Eve, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/21/2018 2:42:00 PM
you certainly have shared empathy in common Emile. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/22/2018 12:04:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/21/2018 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful and fun poem about what we have in common. Enjoyed this.
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Date: 5/21/2018 1:28:00 PM
Thanks so much Susan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/21/2018 9:09:00 AM
We do share empathy! Congrats, Emile! Hugs...Kim
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/21/2018 1:27:00 PM
Thanks Kim, you honor me my friend.
Date: 5/6/2018 9:52:00 AM
I hear the bells chiming for this winner... Superbly done, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/6/2018 1:44:00 PM
Thanks so much Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/4/2018 5:53:00 PM
Very nicely written Emile. I enjoyed this meaningful poem :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/5/2018 9:13:00 AM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/4/2018 12:20:00 AM
Empathy is so sadly lacking in this world. This is very good writing from you, Emile. I am curious about the words given on the bottom. I wanted to try this challenge but just not sure I understand it. Hopefully can give it a try later? Anyway, thanks again for your inspiring friends contest . It is sweet of you to give your book to the big winners like you are doing.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/4/2018 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, the words at the bottom are clues to the poems of Kim's that I've drawn my comparisons on...I appreciate your support my friend, Emile

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