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I divorced the cirrus heat that once laced the sky with fire, carrying searing sins of the scorching sun ~ burning the soft bronze of my melanin; an unabated rage, a labyrinth of blooming lilac, an assortment of angst, a library of healing lullabies homed beneath the glass-skin silence of my quivering chest~ like wind through cathedral clusters, a poison to my psyche, too bright for the darkness that dwells. But perhaps it is in eclipsed spheres I thrive in comfort~ attain nirvana through sketched peace lilies drawn in stillness. Now I’ve found inner nectarine ingredients~ a recipe for resilience to pollinate my passion, to compose myself, to uncloud storms by marrying the moon in my conscience~ painting citrine and topaz on the pillows where I weep, in seclusion and solitude. Here, stars of solace ~ I do breathe~ a self-consolation that needs no granular words scratching the inner walls of the throat chakra. O beloved, forgive my need to see through the haze that has been fogging the fluorescence of your aurora horizon. My woe ~ a broken vow, my ache ~ a bleeding wound, my grief ~ your scar~ a suffocating scarf, a burden I relieve you of with severed ties, letting go amidst the love that still flutters in Luna sparkles… You were a hallucinatory hymn of dawn ~ beautiful, yet bruised, and I am silver thread tied to the oblivion of diamond dusk, basking in the raining remedies, seeking floriated meadows, lost in the breeze of sea-kissed azure~ an awakening: to trade venom for vigor, like the unfurling of sakura in the warmth of spring’s splendor, brushing away crystals of mulberry-black ice when cold are the conversations left unread and dried between misinterpreted metaphors... Sometimes, farewells are healing, moving on ~ a contemplative prayer, the spiritual pilgrimage toward embracing clarity and zen. For there, in the vintage forest of forsaken violets, wilted petals are watered with tears and roseate radiance, and, in the ruins of pixelated promises, we will learn to linger in the luminous reveries of love ~ evermore...

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Date: 5/19/2025 5:23:00 PM
Sometimes two people need to run to the opposite ends of Love's forest so to understand why they want each other...your dreamy poem makes me think of this Poetess. "Homed beneath the glass skin silence of my quivering chest..."...J.A.B.
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Date: 5/17/2025 4:55:00 PM
I don't know how you always write with such melody- that's the best way I can put it. It's beautiful as music. A wonder, dear Ink <3
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Date: 5/17/2025 1:40:00 PM
Great and lovely poem!
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Date: 5/17/2025 10:00:00 AM
laced the sky with fire, Ooo that is gorgeous … glass-skin silence of my quivering chest like wind through cathedral clusters,.. ooo that made me gasp for air.. so sexaaaaay! compose myself, to uncloud storms by marrying the moon in my conscience.. oh wow that’s freaking brilliant!! forgive my need to see through the haze that has been fogging the fluorescence of your aurora horizon. Damn papi the way u make emotions move from these lines!!! trade venom for vigor, Mmmmm! farewells are healing, oh yes!! moving on mmmhmmm child!! a contemplative prayer, tell em!!! This piece is an absolute beauty papi!
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Date: 5/17/2025 9:30:00 AM
Amazing poetry as always my dear poet friend Ink. I love how you expressed angst/pains beautifully and creatively and I love the beautiful/hopeful ending. I enjoyed immensely reading your masterpiece before going to bed. Thanks a lot for sharing along with your loving visit in one of my poems. TYTYVVM. God bless you always and your poetry. Hugs
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Date: 5/17/2025 8:41:00 AM
A new heartfelt song is born with every love, and love inherently delivers a melody. Similar to how sakura blossoms on a tree symbolize rebirth, the loss of a flower's petals heralds the arrival of a new bud—a love. This is my favorite: "Now I’ve found inner nectarine ingredients~ a recipe for resilience, to pollinate my passion," "in the vintage , forest of forsaken violets, wilted petals are watered , with tears and roseate radiance" . Your poetic expressions of profound wisdom, are just wonderfully crafted. Best wishes and good vibes sent your way.
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Date: 5/17/2025 6:40:00 AM
You write of the woes, aches and grief of divorce in such a gentler way than I could ever express, Ink. Flower petals wither and fall, but when a new bud appears, a new love... there's a renewal of life as if sakura on a tree. Love always brings with it a melody, and with each love comes a new song from the heart.
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Date: 5/17/2025 9:28:00 AM
Ahh such a poetic comment dear linnersz, thank you so much, for this thoughtful and encouraging comment! Truly grateful always
Date: 5/17/2025 5:18:00 AM
"We will learn to live in the reveries of love evermore..." Wishing that kind of relationship for you Inky. So much pain and angst on planet earth. Beautiful poetry to start my day
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Date: 5/17/2025 6:22:00 AM
Thank you tomsz, i always appreciate your kind support! Sending you light always
Date: 5/17/2025 4:40:00 AM
“pollinate my passion” ~ this and many more exquisite poetic expressions make this an enchanting cathartic write that tugs at the heart and liberates the soul.
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Date: 5/17/2025 6:21:00 AM
Its an honor to receive your kind support and comments always dear seeker. Thank you for understanding the depth of this poem. Sending you light always
Date: 5/17/2025 4:24:00 AM
Sometimes, farewells are healing, moving on ~ a contemplative prayer, the spiritual pilgrimage toward embracing clarity and zen. Well said ! Wise words expressed through poetry
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Date: 5/17/2025 6:21:00 AM
Awn thank you dahlin for quoting what you liked! Always appreciate you visiting just my poems haha

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