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Severed Ties

We're suppose to be to peas in a pod we use to share everything I share my heartache you share your pain I've been thrown for a loop because you're shutting me out I'm like a bystander on the outside looking in no longer part of the action they say things change I never thought it would happen this time around but the signs are there you're changing you're becoming a stranger I'm not forcing you to open up just want you to know I'm still here I’m still me…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/22/2010 1:46:00 AM
Thia sounds sad to me, Wilma! But enjoyed your write today morning. Thank you for your kind comment on "Roald Amundsen". Cape Town must be very nice at this time of the year - in "Winter"!!! Have a nice day!...Gert :)
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Date: 7/21/2010 12:52:00 PM
Sad poetry Wilma, blimey! it sounds like my life. Wonderful poem >> James
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Date: 7/21/2010 6:52:00 AM
very heartfelt wilma & I really liked how you presented this too-- will get back to you later ok? my email's gone bonkers that or my connection is-- I have to sleep first-- ttyl :) nikko ;) zzzzzz
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Date: 7/20/2010 9:59:00 PM
A well written poem, though sad, feeling the desperation to try to stop something tangibly changing. Take a trip together somewhere, do things you both liked to do, it may offer an opportunity for all to come in the open. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Caroline.
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Date: 7/20/2010 9:12:00 PM
Such an emotional write.. expressive and sensitive in content.. yet strong and vibrant in reality of tone.. enjoyed this one from Miss Fickle..who has a heart full of LUV.. with luv..
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Date: 7/20/2010 8:06:00 PM
this is so sincere and feeling, Wilma. I really enjoyed it. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/20/2010 8:00:00 PM
Great write. I feel the same way about someone special to me. But POP told me easy come easy go! Is it "right" whenyou make someone a priority when your just an option...
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Date: 7/20/2010 7:30:00 PM
YES MISS FICKLE IT ALL STARTS LIKE THAT THAN ENDS UP IN STRANGERS WAY.-SKAT
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Date: 7/20/2010 6:33:00 PM
ah so sad!
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Date: 7/20/2010 4:35:00 PM
Hi Miss Fickle The answer is and you answered it in 3 simple words to another , just want you because if have them it makes it all alright. You are so very right Cheers
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Date: 7/20/2010 10:16:00 AM
very nice write...great last line...and thank you for the comment on my piece...TAH
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Date: 7/20/2010 8:12:00 AM
Dear Wilma, thanks for your beautiful comments on my poem. It gave me the chance to read your new poem, “Severed Ties,” which is a little sad but lovely. Love, Amy.
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