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Seventeen Is the Lucky Number

My Darling (theme number 5) Ten times as strong as yesterday I feel for you, my Darling; oh that I could be your empath, for my love is very real. Your every aura I would hope to see. Feeling you lamenting, I'd be right there - a weeping willow, tears falling like rain to cry with you and show you that I care, and if I could, I'd take away your pain. Nothing is incidental about you! My veneration for you can't decline. Your weakness I'd make strong, for I would do anything if I knew that you were mine. In some idyllic place where you might lie supine, I'd lie beside you and I'd kiss your lips to know the sweetness of your sigh. Would you at last then share with me your bliss? Aug. 1, 2019 For Laura Loo's 17 Is The Lucky Number - Rhyme Poetry Contest

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Date: 10/13/2019 2:59:00 PM
i really like this Andrea. A beautiful write.
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Date: 8/6/2019 2:10:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win. Romantically blissful verse.
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Date: 8/5/2019 9:07:00 AM
A lovely love song...congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/4/2019 6:45:00 PM
There is such a sweetness to this one. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/4/2019 2:54:00 PM
sweet Andrea! love how you used all 10 words...great job, thank you for your participation and congratulations on your win. :)-luloo
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Date: 8/4/2019 12:05:00 PM
Oh, this is a lovely poem! Love this. :)
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Date: 8/3/2019 5:36:00 PM
I'd kiss your lips to know the sweetness of your sigh. I love that line. As you always do Andrea when it comes to writing romantic poems. You just seem to find a fresh vein of muse to express the essence of your heart. <3 :)
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Date: 8/3/2019 9:40:00 AM
This is what I call the old magic of English poetry. I didn't uncover its secret yet. A caesura? A fixed number of syllables? I donno. A poet's personal talent, most likely. My eyes and ears enjoyed every line.
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Date: 8/3/2019 9:34:00 AM
Poetic bliss including a kiss. He’s a lucky guy!
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Date: 8/3/2019 1:45:00 AM
Lucky number 17 - sounds promising - a beautiful write Andrea. All the best, Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/2/2019 9:57:00 PM
Moving love poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/2/2019 6:57:00 AM
A charming write Andrea--all the best.
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Date: 8/2/2019 5:57:00 AM
When good had given me a choice, What I picked out was pretty voice; Will blend in, Again and again, To sing in choir with and did rejoice. Jim Horn
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Date: 8/2/2019 1:38:00 AM
Totally blown away by the loveliness. A FAV...best wishes Pangiota I predict this a winner.
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Date: 8/1/2019 11:01:00 PM
Lovely luck!
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Book: Shattered Sighs