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Seventeen Is the Lucky Number

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China, Tree, Weeping Willow, Leaves

My Darling My darling, ten months does not a year make as I lie supine, lamenting love’s fate, my feelings of weakness as an empath your strong aura--no incidental laugh. Darling, veneration is growing cold but not my idyllic love for you so meet in the park by the weeping willow. 7/8/19 Theme #5 My Darling 17 is the Lucky Number - Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Lu Loo

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Date: 8/8/2019 11:28:00 PM
This is beautiful, with hope hanging on. Congratulations on your deserving wonderful First Place win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/5/2019 8:41:00 AM
The pull of love is well penned in your poem. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/4/2019 10:19:00 PM
Congratulations Janis, you incorporated all and more with brevity and feeling
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Date: 8/4/2019 2:48:00 PM
beautiful sweet Janis...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your win. :)-luloo
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Date: 7/8/2019 7:52:00 AM
Wow Janis, you met this challenge head on with a smooth and silky winner. Bravo.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 7/13/2019 7:34:00 PM
Thanks Line.

Book: Shattered Sighs