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Sevenbits Diary

All my innermost secrets
are kept under lock and key
My red leather diary
is my daily confidante
My thoughts and deeds are written
in very vivid detail

I murdered him… shhh don’t tell!


Sevenbits Contest
Sponsored by Nette Onclaud

Checked with How Many Syllables

10-02-17

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2017

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Frances Schiavina Date: 10/9/2017 9:35:00 AM I love your poetry Jan! Congratulations, Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/9/2017 1:21:00 PM Thanks Frances:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/8/2017 8:37:00 PM WAY TO GO, JAN!!! Congrats on your great win. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/9/2017 1:21:00 PM Thanks Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 10/8/2017 3:22:00 AM Jan - sincere congratulations on your well-earned win, my friend, and blessings for more such recognition of your wonderful writing talents! Keep up the great work! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/9/2017 1:20:00 PM Thanks Greg:-) hugs jan xx

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 10/8/2017 2:02:00 AM Congratulations, Jan for your fine win. What a suspense in the last line! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/9/2017 1:20:00 PM Thanks Subimal:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper Date: 10/7/2017 8:08:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Jan, love the tail twister :) Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/9/2017 1:20:00 PM Thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France Date: 10/7/2017 4:49:00 PM Jan, back to say congrats, I knew this was a winner! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/7/2017 4:51:00 PM Thanks so much Constance:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/7/2017 4:06:00 PM jan!..'wicked' ending which floored me.... high -five of congrats and thanks for joining this contest...huggs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/7/2017 4:17:00 PM Thanks for my placement Nette:-) hugs jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart Date: 10/7/2017 4:03:00 PM How funny! Congrats on your win! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/7/2017 4:16:00 PM Thanks Dale:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus Date: 10/5/2017 11:19:00 AM Here you have the basis for a black comedy, Jan!! By the way, we're all good at keeping secrets:) Hugs // paul Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/5/2017 11:47:00 AM lol Paul I can't resist a little humour and this one is definitely dark humour:-) hugs jan xx

Russell Sivey Date: 10/4/2017 5:34:00 AM Ha! You always have a way with awesome humor my friend! I loved the way you approached this contest, a fabulous poem! I thought that this write was written in a spectacular way and I was in awe of it this morning! Great Work!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/4/2017 5:44:00 AM Thanks Russell Nette asked for a twist at the end and I think I delivered it lol:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y. Date: 10/4/2017 4:42:00 AM Hi Jan, This is a good take on the contest theme. Good twist at the end. I wasn't expecting that at all. I was going to do the "Diary" theme but I changed my mind last minute. I wish you the best of luck- Alexis Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/4/2017 5:08:00 AM I've seen many diary themes and all of them are so different:-) hugs jan xx

Ralph Sergi Date: 10/3/2017 6:21:00 PM I loved this satire, Jan! you don't take life too seriously. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/4/2017 4:09:00 AM I just have fun writing Ralph I never know what will come from my muse, but i do know one thing life is all too short and I just try and make folks smile with my silly simple poems:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/3/2017 5:27:00 PM haha, Love that you did it funny. A lot of folks are doing diary DANG. I thought I was picking one of the lesser used themes (mine is not posted yet) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/4/2017 4:10:00 AM I couldn't resist a real twist at the end... as you know i take my risk with humour in contest and it often backfires lol lol:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France Date: 10/3/2017 9:27:00 AM Jan, oh what a magical write and your last line is awesome ! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/4/2017 4:11:00 AM Thanks Constance:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/3/2017 8:25:00 AM Ha ha, love the ending! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/4/2017 4:11:00 AM Glad I made you smile Richard:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/3/2017 4:07:00 AM - I put lock on your secret, Jan - Very well done, good luck in the contest - hugs and lovely day // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/4/2017 4:12:00 AM I know my secret is safe with you:-) hugs jan xx

Matthew Anish Date: 10/2/2017 7:13:00 PM That is a terrible secret!!d I journal a lot - do you? Good luck in the contest Yours Matthew Anish Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/2/2017 7:20:00 PM I have never kept a diary which in these circumstances is a good job!:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile Date: 10/2/2017 6:37:00 PM This was fun, Jan! Good Luck !!! I won't tell. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/2/2017 6:58:00 PM Thanks Mike I think my secret is safe with you :-):-) hugs jan xx

Kevin Shaw Date: 10/2/2017 5:11:00 PM Love this, anyone that "Confidante" deserves to get away with murder. Good Luck in the contest, I think you might have a winner, regards, Kevin Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/2/2017 5:14:00 PM Thankfully its fiction as I don't keep a diary at all but as for the murder shhh... well i guess some folks will consider I murder poetry when I write lol:-) hugs jan xx