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All my innermost secrets are kept under lock and key My red leather diary is my daily confidante My thoughts and deeds are written in very vivid detail I murdered him… shhh don’t tell! Sevenbits Contest Sponsored by Nette Onclaud Checked with How Many Syllables 10-02-17

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Frances Schiavina

Date: 10/9/2017 9:35:00 AM

I love your poetry Jan! Congratulations,

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2017 1:21:00 PM

Thanks Frances:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2017 8:37:00 PM

WAY TO GO, JAN!!! Congrats on your great win.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2017 1:21:00 PM

Thanks Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/8/2017 3:22:00 AM

Jan - sincere congratulations on your well-earned win, my friend, and blessings for more such recognition of your wonderful writing talents! Keep up the great work!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2017 1:20:00 PM

Thanks Greg:-) hugs jan xx

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 10/8/2017 2:02:00 AM

Congratulations, Jan for your fine win. What a suspense in the last line!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2017 1:20:00 PM

Thanks Subimal:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 10/7/2017 8:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jan, love the tail twister :) Hugs Eve ~`*

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2017 1:20:00 PM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 10/7/2017 4:49:00 PM

Jan, back to say congrats, I knew this was a winner!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/7/2017 4:51:00 PM

Thanks so much Constance:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/7/2017 4:06:00 PM

jan!..'wicked' ending which floored me.... high -five of congrats and thanks for joining this contest...huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 10/7/2017 4:17:00 PM

Thanks for my placement Nette:-) hugs jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 10/7/2017 4:03:00 PM

How funny! Congrats on your win!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/7/2017 4:16:00 PM

Thanks Dale:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 10/5/2017 11:19:00 AM

Here you have the basis for a black comedy, Jan!! By the way, we're all good at keeping secrets:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 10/5/2017 11:47:00 AM

lol Paul I can't resist a little humour and this one is definitely dark humour:-) hugs jan xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/4/2017 5:34:00 AM

Ha! You always have a way with awesome humor my friend! I loved the way you approached this contest, a fabulous poem! I thought that this write was written in a spectacular way and I was in awe of it this morning! Great Work!!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/4/2017 5:44:00 AM

Thanks Russell Nette asked for a twist at the end and I think I delivered it lol:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/4/2017 4:42:00 AM

Hi Jan, This is a good take on the contest theme. Good twist at the end. I wasn't expecting that at all. I was going to do the "Diary" theme but I changed my mind last minute. I wish you the best of luck- Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 10/4/2017 5:08:00 AM

I've seen many diary themes and all of them are so different:-) hugs jan xx

Ralph Sergi

Date: 10/3/2017 6:21:00 PM

I loved this satire, Jan! you don't take life too seriously.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/4/2017 4:09:00 AM

I just have fun writing Ralph I never know what will come from my muse, but i do know one thing life is all too short and I just try and make folks smile with my silly simple poems:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2017 5:27:00 PM

haha, Love that you did it funny. A lot of folks are doing diary DANG. I thought I was picking one of the lesser used themes (mine is not posted yet)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/4/2017 4:10:00 AM

I couldn't resist a real twist at the end... as you know i take my risk with humour in contest and it often backfires lol lol:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 10/3/2017 9:27:00 AM

Jan, oh what a magical write and your last line is awesome !

Jan Allison
Date: 10/4/2017 4:11:00 AM

Thanks Constance:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/3/2017 8:25:00 AM

Ha ha, love the ending!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/4/2017 4:11:00 AM

Glad I made you smile Richard:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/3/2017 4:07:00 AM

- I put lock on your secret, Jan - Very well done, good luck in the contest - hugs and lovely day // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/4/2017 4:12:00 AM

I know my secret is safe with you:-) hugs jan xx

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/2/2017 7:13:00 PM

That is a terrible secret!!d I journal a lot - do you? Good luck in the contest Yours Matthew Anish

Jan Allison
Date: 10/2/2017 7:20:00 PM

I have never kept a diary which in these circumstances is a good job!:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/2/2017 6:37:00 PM

This was fun, Jan! Good Luck !!! I won't tell.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/2/2017 6:58:00 PM

Thanks Mike I think my secret is safe with you :-):-) hugs jan xx

Kevin Shaw

Date: 10/2/2017 5:11:00 PM

Love this, anyone that "Confidante" deserves to get away with murder. Good Luck in the contest, I think you might have a winner, regards, Kevin

Jan Allison
Date: 10/2/2017 5:14:00 PM

Thankfully its fiction as I don't keep a diary at all but as for the murder shhh... well i guess some folks will consider I murder poetry when I write lol:-) hugs jan xx