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Sevenbits - Diary

Sevenbits - Diary Scribbled of my happiness ‘He makes me swoon - my eyes dance’ Swaddled my innermost thoughts Nazi moles must not trespass Sunset dust hurts, as I fly Locked away behind the clouds The cosmos courts all my words 10/3/2017 Contest: Sevenbits *moles - spies

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Frances Schiavina

Date: 10/9/2017 9:38:00 AM

How original! Congratulations Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/9/2017 11:06:00 AM

Thank you, Frances!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2017 8:41:00 PM

I really liked the creativity here and the imagery, Kim. I was thinking the other moles, so I am glad you put that note at the bottom!! Congrats on your win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/8/2017 9:11:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/8/2017 3:26:00 AM

Beautiful little gem of a write, Kim - I loved it! Congrats on your win, my friend! <3

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/8/2017 5:43:00 AM

Thank you so much, Greg!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 10/8/2017 2:07:00 AM

Congratulations, Kim on your win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/8/2017 5:43:00 AM

Thanks, Subimal!

Eve Roper

Date: 10/7/2017 8:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Kim ~`*

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/7/2017 8:28:00 PM

Thank you, Eve!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/7/2017 4:56:00 PM

greeat sampling of anti-thesis, kim... the world woos your inner feelings...sweet congrats on your placement with thanks for finding time to join...huggs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/7/2017 8:31:00 PM

About Anne Frank. Her words were meant for her eyes only but the world owns them now.

Constance La France

Date: 10/7/2017 4:54:00 PM

Kim, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this interesting write !

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/7/2017 8:32:00 PM

Thank you, Constance!