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He carries his paper boats Out onto the sea, like he Often does, one as a hat. Whispers charm words, soft and low In his mind, his boat transforms He's a sailor to set sail On the boundless rolling sea. 5/15/2020 FINISH LINE IN SEVEN Poetry Contest #2 Paper Boats Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

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Date: 5/19/2020 11:31:00 PM
An innocent child with his little boat envisions himself as the Captain of a might ship. Beautifully expressed. Congratulations Eve :)
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Date: 5/17/2020 7:40:00 PM
Well stated Such a boy can transforms all in life's boat. Peace, Love and Joy. Always.
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Date: 5/16/2020 9:29:00 AM
Cute, Eve and love the pic!
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Date: 5/16/2020 3:08:00 AM
Great entry Eve..Good luck in the contest..
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Date: 5/16/2020 2:27:00 AM
A child's imagination is priceless. Nicely done Eve....
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