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Seven Paper Boats

Seven paper boats sailing. Upon the highly rough seas. Tossed around like a small leaf. Will they make it through the storm? The sun is now coming out. A beautiful day at sea. Seven paper boats are safe. Date Written: 5/15/2020

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/16/2020 2:54:00 PM

I like the imagery a lot, Paula. If this is fir a contest?..best wishes Panagiota xoxo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/16/2020 5:13:00 PM

Glad you like it. Thanks for your note and best wishes. Have wonderful weekend............

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/16/2020 9:30:00 AM

You had us caring if those paper boats would make it through the storm! :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/16/2020 1:10:00 PM

What a storm it was. They are all safe and docked. Thanks for your note. Have a wonderful weekend.........

Jan Allison

Date: 5/15/2020 3:01:00 PM

I can picture the boats being tossed about on the waves, good luck in the contest Paula:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/16/2020 5:12:00 PM

Thanks for your note and good luck. The storm was bad but they make it to the dock. Enjoy your weekend..........