Paula Goldsmith Poet Free verse

Seven Paper Boats

Seven paper boats sailing. 
Upon the highly rough seas.
Tossed around like a small leaf.
Will they make it through the storm?
The sun is now coming out.
A beautiful day at sea.
Seven paper boats are safe.

Date Written: 5/15/2020

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Panagiota Romios May 16, 2020 at 2:54 PM I like the imagery a lot, Paula. If this is fir a contest?..best wishes Panagiota xoxo Paula Goldsmith May 16, 2020 at 5:13 PM Glad you like it. Thanks for your note and best wishes. Have wonderful weekend............

Kim Rodrigues May 16, 2020 at 9:30 AM You had us caring if those paper boats would make it through the storm! :) Paula Goldsmith May 16, 2020 at 1:10 PM What a storm it was. They are all safe and docked. Thanks for your note. Have a wonderful weekend.........

Jan Allison May 15, 2020 at 3:01 PM I can picture the boats being tossed about on the waves, good luck in the contest Paula:-) hugs Jan xx Paula Goldsmith May 16, 2020 at 5:12 PM Thanks for your note and good luck. The storm was bad but they make it to the dock. Enjoy your weekend..........