Seven Hundred Septembers

(Idle musings on the facade of Seville Cathedral)

How patiently they suffer, these old saints! 
Their sandstone features, crumbled, vague, 
some noses gone (some medieval ague, 
or Time's cruel drip?) they offer no complaints. 

Stranded seven centuries on this reef, 
they bake, and wait resignedly, begowned, 
for bell-tower shade slowly to inch around. 
Do bas-reliefs experience relief? 

This church was once a mosque. In point of fact, 
the holy ancient venerable Gothic pile 
(and here one struggles to suppress a smile) 
has relatively recently been sacked, 

and only lately put to Christian use. 
These saintly faces, preternaturally mild - 
do they still fret? Or are they reconciled 
to slow decay, as hand or ear works loose? 

And do they savour time as you or I, 
observing how, below them in the street, 
perukes give way to pony-tails and pleats? 
Or do, for them, Septembers flicker by 

like squandered seconds? Do they muse on Fate 
and Destiny? What if my youth has gone? 
What if this woman keeps me hanging on? 
They also serve who only stand and wait.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 3/8/2017 1:49:00 PM
A beautiful written and touching reflective write. Reading this was my pleasure! All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 3/8/2017 12:41:00 AM
You're really an expert at making me feel homesick for Al-Andalus, aren't you :) The fun thing with many of the old mosques in Al-Andalus, is that later the catholics were too 'lazy' to tear the minarets down, so they built their towers around them. Never realizing that they preserved the minarets neatly that way. Oh, the irony :)
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Michael Coy
Date: 3/8/2017 7:11:00 AM
No, you didn't "miss" it. I saw it for the first time, as a result of your comment!
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Darren White
Date: 3/8/2017 2:44:00 AM
Sorry that I missed the innuendo :) I am sometimes completely oblivious.
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Michael Coy
Date: 3/8/2017 12:59:00 AM
And there I am, trying to build a fancy Baroque love-affair around my ancient (phallic) minaret ... it's uncanny how finely-tuned you and I are on these cultural matters. Thank you, amigo.
Date: 3/7/2017 2:14:00 PM
I enjoyed this idle musing, the old art student I'm me quaked with delight at "do bas-reliefs experience relief?", very well done Michael, you are a true poet in the classic sense.
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Michael Coy
Date: 3/7/2017 2:16:00 PM
I am honoured, Maureen. A sincere (and very happy) "thank you".
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