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SEVEN FOR CHAOS AND ORDER-Town Tempest The town is terrorized by a tempest’s sudden onslaught, torrents of rain run like rivers down sidewalks and dance in bubbles on hot asphalt streets. Wicked winds rip and toss the metro's demeanor. A rainbow appears in a half clear sky. God’s promise sign seems to assure all humankind, "This city has survived the terror of the tempest." 1/29/17 SEVEN FOR CHAOS AND ORDER Sponsored by: nette onclaud

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Winged Warrior

Date: 2/2/2017 2:26:00 PM

Congrats!!! Janis...very well done my friend...god bless...^WW^

Janis Thompson
Date: 2/3/2017 11:53:00 AM

Thanks, WW.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/2/2017 12:48:00 AM

Wow! This is such a wonderful way of portraying the theme, Janis:) congratulations on your win:)

Janis Thompson
Date: 2/3/2017 11:54:00 AM

Thanks, Jo.

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/1/2017 7:00:00 PM

Such wonderful imagery presented in your well-written poem, Janis. A perfect theme for 'chaos' and 'order', and congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Janis Thompson
Date: 2/3/2017 11:55:00 AM

Thanks, Sandra.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 2/1/2017 5:43:00 PM

Congrats for your placement Janis, with this brilliant piece!!! ;-)

Janis Thompson
Date: 2/1/2017 6:01:00 PM

Thanks, Teddy.

Afzal Nusker

Date: 2/1/2017 11:39:00 AM

Phew...what a relief. I can totally relate to the feeling. Nicely done! Congratulations!

Janis Thompson
Date: 2/1/2017 6:02:00 PM

Thanks, Afzal.

Joseph May

Date: 2/1/2017 10:00:00 AM

Congrats on your win Janis

Janis Thompson
Date: 2/1/2017 6:06:00 PM

Thanks, Joseph.

Lyva Marty

Date: 1/31/2017 2:29:00 AM

Descriptive picture of a tempest and calm aftermath. I think 8-11 words for every line is asked. GL in the finals!

Janis Thompson
Date: 1/31/2017 7:09:00 PM

Thanks.

Chris Green

Date: 1/30/2017 7:13:00 AM

This was great Janis. I missed the contest completely so I have no idea what the rules were, but this seems wonderful for what I have seen.

Janis Thompson
Date: 1/30/2017 1:05:00 PM

Thanks Chris. Competition will be tough.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/29/2017 7:56:00 PM

A great take on the contest theme and the thought of a severe storm sure would be chaotic Janis and scary to be caught up in, but the rainbow brings hope of brighter days:-) hugs jan xx

Janis Thompson
Date: 1/30/2017 1:07:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. I really appreciate your encouragement. Blessings, janis.