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Seven For Chaos and Order--Home

Road rage at starlit dusk, curdling like grilled blood When noise of a hurried pack swerves with screams; The freeway transforms into a jail of time-muggers As I smell the acrid odor of jumbled agitation. Pine boughs rest and sway along the dusty byway Thawing a tired mind to watch moonray above, lending light— An evening assured open doors would welcome me home. Seven For Chaos And Order nette onclaud Contest 28 Jan 2017

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Date: 2/2/2017 2:34:00 PM
Congrats!!! Noel...very well done...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 2/1/2017 12:47:00 PM
Very brilliant.. I loved the way u expressed the home the one place we are always awaited and welcome... :) Congratulations...
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Date: 2/1/2017 9:56:00 AM
you set the stage of day's noise and boom that is consistently bombarding us and ending this with peaceful thoughts of home ... very visual and impeccably done.. congrats on your glory win ans thanks for participating, noel..huggs
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Date: 1/28/2017 1:38:00 PM
Very well portrayed Noel...have a safe drive home my friend lol...god bless...^WW^
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