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Seven For Chaos and Order- Jumbled Words

There's a turmoil of thoughts racing through my mind Letting loose havoc, clarity is hard to find Thoughts colliding with each other, trying to be free What disarray exists when ideas are not allowed to be Suddenly the jumble of thoughts get organized right And order returns in harmony and delight So I calmly arrange them as I write - - - 1/28/17 Seven for Chaos and order contest of Nette Onclaud

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Winged Warrior

Date: 2/2/2017 2:31:00 PM

Congrats!!! Joseph...very well done my friend...god bless...^WW^

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/1/2017 7:05:00 PM

Back again, Joseph, to congratulate you on your fine win! Sandra

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 2/1/2017 5:45:00 PM

Greetings Joseph. Congrats for your WIN with this piece, filled with great imagery!!! ;-)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/1/2017 12:39:00 PM

i like the way you depicted the mad rush of concepts within the mind and slowly arrange a theme in an orderly, lyrical manner... thanks for entering and sweet congrats for garnering a good spot, joseph..huggs

Joseph May
Date: 2/1/2017 4:12:00 PM

Thank you for my placement Nette...hugs..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2017 7:49:00 PM

very nice approach this was!! I like it a lot.

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/29/2017 7:43:00 PM

Yes, Joseph, a perfect theme to contrast 'chaos' and 'order' as all we poets know! You have captured the frustration well! Best wishes for the contest. Sandra

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/29/2017 4:50:00 AM

I like this entry the best, Joseph:)every writer can relate to it :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/28/2017 11:06:00 PM

Calming the mind is difficult to do in this chaotic world we live in where everyone seems to be in a hurry and there isn't enough time in the day. I can relate. Walking where there are trees helps soothe my soul. I like the way your last two lines return to harmony. : ) 7

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/28/2017 4:05:00 PM

Hi Joseph, This is so well written. It seems as though we went a simular theme. Sometimes it can be total chaos in the mind. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

Date: 1/28/2017 3:17:00 PM

I know the feeling perfectly well Joseph!:-) hugs Jan xx

Winged Warrior

Date: 1/28/2017 1:18:00 PM

I'm glad you cleared your mind lol...very well done my friend...god bless...^WW^